Recent Comments

BearBoi
4/21/21, 5:34 AM
Jakey's having a tough time-- i'm hoping he does find the daddy of his dreams some day soon and he doesn't get TOO much trouble from all this. in a way, it was almost comfy and reassuring that Doug here is such a... bro. He just seems like a nice friend (with benefits) to Jake. the twinges of mental/sexuality changes and the memories coming to him are pretty hot, and him just dealing with the difference of perspective of being a smaller gayer bitch-boi.
BearBoi
4/21/21, 4:37 AM
when you change speakers in a dialogue scene, you make a new paragraph. it's difficult to read like this.
Elm
4/21/21, 3:39 AM
Cute, intriguing and funny!
4/20/21, 8:38 PM
Would love to read more of this

4/21/21, 2:20 AM
Glad you like it! @Anon529373
4/20/21, 6:50 PM
wow, that was on if the hottest and best stories I ever read. Please continue it :)

4/21/21, 2:19 AM
Thank you so much for your kind word, I'm flattered haha, and yeah I hope I'll write more of it in the future! @jade
4/20/21, 5:45 PM
hope this is going to be a series.

4/21/21, 2:18 AM
I do want to write more in this setting, and if time permits, I'll do it!@Robas
Apr 18, 2021
4/21/21, 2:10 AM
This is hot and cute as hell. Can't wait to see more from you, man!
4/21/21, 12:03 AM
An intriguing story indeed. I like the features of the story: the pendant that has some power, the humming, the similar looks. Very nice set up to what I believe will be a great story.
Jay
4/20/21, 9:23 PM
I keep coming back to this one - what a wonderful story. Well written, brilliant idea, and succinct without being abrupt or too short. It checks every box. Great job!!
Anonymous
4/20/21, 9:18 PM
bnrilliant writing, I cannot stop reading, and good job I have loads of batteries....