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4/21/21, 2:21 PM
Wow! This is an impressive start! I look forward to reading more!
fex
4/8/21, 6:22 AM
Amazing story, loving it so much! I could picture Gary wanting a bit more revenge and instead of giving him the same kind of shorts, he gives mike a pair with a slit behind. The pair looks perfectly ordinary and just like the other pair when standing in a relaxed position, but if he spreads his legs(specially if he bends over) or squats or raises his leg to climb maybe a ladder or do leg pushes on the leg press; he unknowingly presents his cute hole to everyone around him. Much later, to his horror he realizes he had been doing this for nearly the whole cruise, and everyone saw his hole in many states, moist with cum, puffy and pink, spread by a transparent glass buttplug, filled with a multitude of sex toys, after using a cream that tickles and forces his hole to twitch, itch and pucker up for hours, etc. or maybe the cruise is around easter and he gets "volunteered" to be a sexy easter bunny with ears and a cute fluffy buttplug tail. Again awesome story and thanks for sharing it!1

4/21/21, 2:15 PM
@fex that sounds hot. perhaps I will incorporate it in my next chapter
3/22/21, 11:58 AM
very hot and well written! super excited for further Mike humiliation and what you've got in store for him. - after these gym session he has to wash the gym gear provided to the participants...maybe suck each jockstrap clean with his mouth before he can lead them into the wash...of course guys get wind of this and leave him some surprises knowing he'll be licking whatever is left - maybe he is made to work a glory hole stall. The jock must to service two holes at once, one with his mouth and the other with his jock-puss. - is humiliated “anonymously” servicing so much dick...but does or doesn’t realize the bathroom has cameras and is broadcasting his work online. - keep up the great story and thank you!

4/21/21, 2:14 PM
@jkstrapme I will be going in a different direction. I hope you like it ;-)
Tfb
3/3/21, 5:47 PM
This checks almost every box for me and I love it

4/21/21, 2:13 PM
@Tfb thanks :-)
Muscle-Flex
3/4/21, 1:42 AM
Damn, this was good. Another excellent chapter. It was the perfect revenge scenario for setting Mike up for more trouble. The scenes in the changing room at the little shop were hot, especially Mike's helplessness and his confusion over what was happening... the way our narrator makes Mike look at him at the critical moment. Gary provided some comedy. And the outfit Mike will now have to wear to the gym. Heh heh heh. I can't wait to see what happens at one of Mike's personal training sessions. When he shows his clients what exercises will work which muscles best, I suppose they might understand better if they can feel each particular muscle he is talking about... on his own body. Uh oh... trouble ahead for Mike! Great job with this chapter! Thanks!

4/21/21, 2:12 PM
@Muscle-Flex thank you for the nice and well put comment. you are really getting the idea behind it
Jul 4, 2016
4/21/21, 6:44 AM
I’m late to the party but I loved this story! I agree with other commenters that a boy should be what his master wants, even if he is a freak.

screamingmoist
4/21/21, 12:41 PM
@KinkyNickInSea Thanks! "A Trip to the Cabin" has similar changes taking place if you're in the mood for more.
4/21/21, 10:46 AM
want to know more....how is this going to end
BearBoi
4/21/21, 5:34 AM
Jakey's having a tough time-- i'm hoping he does find the daddy of his dreams some day soon and he doesn't get TOO much trouble from all this. in a way, it was almost comfy and reassuring that Doug here is such a... bro. He just seems like a nice friend (with benefits) to Jake. the twinges of mental/sexuality changes and the memories coming to him are pretty hot, and him just dealing with the difference of perspective of being a smaller gayer bitch-boi.
BearBoi
4/21/21, 4:37 AM
when you change speakers in a dialogue scene, you make a new paragraph. it's difficult to read like this.
Elm
4/21/21, 3:39 AM
Cute, intriguing and funny!