Recent Comments

4/18/21, 10:01 PM
Woof. That was a fun read. Your worldbuilding is great, and I'm already intrigued by the three main characters we've met here. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Jeff reacts to Andy's growth and if he'll also want to borrow the prostate massager. (Hell, I kind of do.) I also want to be a member on that discord server. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great work!

4/19/21, 12:18 AM
@Proteus Thank you! I've gotten two more parts written so far, just editing. We'll see Jeff again in part 3
Steve
4/18/21, 5:58 PM
very nice start and looking forward to fhe next chapters

4/19/21, 12:14 AM
@Steve thank you :) next chapter coming in soon :)
BPtime
4/18/21, 3:25 PM
Very curious where this will go.

4/19/21, 12:12 AM
@BPtime thanks for the feedback!
Apr 18, 2021
arigabot
4/18/21, 8:30 PM
i love stories like this, such a cute concept
Apr 18, 2021
4/18/21, 5:36 PM
I hope to see a part 3 soon
Apr 18, 2021
screamingmoist
4/18/21, 3:12 PM
If the bar or a couple of these characters seem familiar that's because you saw them previously in "Untangled."
4/18/21, 1:34 PM
I've really been enjoying this series! What I especially love in this chapter is the universal translator malfunction and the subtle bits and pieces of information you reveal about Tyzon and the others' motives over time. Your worldbuilding is excellent. You also manage to focus the action on the sensual experiences that Charley is having while still managing to unfold that information for us in the background. Love it!
4/6/21, 9:59 AM
Very much enjoying the slow burn on this as the emotional and mental changes work their way through!

4/18/21, 1:30 PM
@Dace this is me. More seductively erotic or s simple thriller Goosebumps with gay sex, if will. Sorry so long on feed back. Also like establishing character and starting outside typical for sitesetup looking
Nutiper
4/18/21, 8:41 AM
Oh, this was so *fun* and hot! And I love that Spencer's first reaction at getting a slightly bigger dick isn't to try the prostate massager again and grow his dick further — it's to immediately call up Andy in hopes of living out his sudden intense fantasies about getting pounded by Andy's nine-incher. Makes me wonder what *would* happen if Spencer used the massager a second time... (And, well, I'm sure we'll find out!) What a great first chapter, and I'm really looking forward to reading the next one!

4/18/21, 11:28 AM
@Nutiper Thank you! and hmm, let's just say that Andy might be wondering the same thing as you... ;)
4/18/21, 9:12 AM
Sounds like a nice start, very excited to see where you'll be taking this! And I see this is your first story here, welcome to the author gang!

4/18/21, 9:58 AM
@Transformheaven Thank you! And thank you for the warm welcome :) I've been writing a 1 or 2 pieces in the past, all published in the big T. I wasn't sure they would fit the mind control requirement here, might be reconsidering those in the future :)