Recent Comments

Alex Lat
4/19/21, 12:22 PM
i liked a lot, i also look to your tumblr and liked a lot of your writing, and wanna see how will you develop this world, be it in the individualities and personalities and in the resistance

4/19/21, 3:18 PM
@Alex Lat wow thank you! That means so much :D Yep I've already drawn a mind map of who to introduce (there are tons!) The resistance will play a big part in this as well, hopefully I'll be able to do justice :)

4/19/21, 3:18 PM
@Alex Lat wow thank you! That means so much :D Yep I've already drawn a mind map of who to introduce (there are tons!) The resistance will play a big part in this as well, hopefully I'll be able to do justice :)
4/19/21, 2:29 PM
Wow. I was not expecting this to ever get a finale. Or one that was so hot. I loved the sex and loved the fantasy fulfillment Bill finally got, all around, while still having to do whatever anyone tells him. His wish about things going his way turned out very well tho.
4/19/21, 10:36 AM
I'm so glad for this EPIC conclusion. I am really happy you decided to finish it! It was awesome!
Anonymous
4/19/21, 8:30 AM
I can't help but keep coming back to this one, SUPER hot. it's a little short but honestly it gets the job done so well that I prefer it this way so I don't feel guilty for not reading it all after getting off. AMAZING WORK keep it up
4/19/21, 6:11 AM
loving this series
4/19/21, 6:05 AM
I'd love to know how these guys are being controlled.
4/19/21, 5:23 AM
Hope their is more to come.
Apr 13, 2020
4/19/21, 5:11 AM
hope you revisit this story soon!
4/18/21, 4:35 PM
Great set up and so looking forward to a detailed and long sex scene or two in the next chapter.

4/19/21, 12:20 AM
@nature1490 thank you! and yeah, this was a set up to a very self-indulgent second chapter ;)
4/18/21, 10:01 PM
Woof. That was a fun read. Your worldbuilding is great, and I'm already intrigued by the three main characters we've met here. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Jeff reacts to Andy's growth and if he'll also want to borrow the prostate massager. (Hell, I kind of do.) I also want to be a member on that discord server. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great work!

4/19/21, 12:18 AM
@Proteus Thank you! I've gotten two more parts written so far, just editing. We'll see Jeff again in part 3