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Apr 13, 2020
4/19/21, 5:11 AM
hope you revisit this story soon!
4/18/21, 4:35 PM
Great set up and so looking forward to a detailed and long sex scene or two in the next chapter.

4/19/21, 12:20 AM
@nature1490 thank you! and yeah, this was a set up to a very self-indulgent second chapter ;)
4/18/21, 10:01 PM
Woof. That was a fun read. Your worldbuilding is great, and I'm already intrigued by the three main characters we've met here. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Jeff reacts to Andy's growth and if he'll also want to borrow the prostate massager. (Hell, I kind of do.) I also want to be a member on that discord server. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great work!

4/19/21, 12:18 AM
@Proteus Thank you! I've gotten two more parts written so far, just editing. We'll see Jeff again in part 3
Steve
4/18/21, 5:58 PM
very nice start and looking forward to fhe next chapters

4/19/21, 12:14 AM
@Steve thank you :) next chapter coming in soon :)
BPtime
4/18/21, 3:25 PM
Very curious where this will go.

4/19/21, 12:12 AM
@BPtime thanks for the feedback!
Apr 18, 2021
arigabot
4/18/21, 8:30 PM
i love stories like this, such a cute concept
Apr 18, 2021
4/18/21, 5:36 PM
I hope to see a part 3 soon
Apr 18, 2021
screamingmoist
4/18/21, 3:12 PM
If the bar or a couple of these characters seem familiar that's because you saw them previously in "Untangled."
4/18/21, 1:34 PM
I've really been enjoying this series! What I especially love in this chapter is the universal translator malfunction and the subtle bits and pieces of information you reveal about Tyzon and the others' motives over time. Your worldbuilding is excellent. You also manage to focus the action on the sensual experiences that Charley is having while still managing to unfold that information for us in the background. Love it!
4/6/21, 9:59 AM
Very much enjoying the slow burn on this as the emotional and mental changes work their way through!

4/18/21, 1:30 PM
@Dace this is me. More seductively erotic or s simple thriller Goosebumps with gay sex, if will. Sorry so long on feed back. Also like establishing character and starting outside typical for sitesetup looking