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4/18/21, 6:01 AM
Really excited to see where this is headed!

4/18/21, 8:47 AM
@Grant Spiral Thanks for this! I'm pumped :) I'm cleaning up chapter 2, hopefully I'll finish it soonest :)
Capatalistbees
4/18/21, 8:46 AM
Super fun, really loved it! Fingers crossed for a sequel.
4/18/21, 7:01 AM
Glad to see this is just intended as a prologue. I thought the premise here was very hot, but I missed having discernible characters with individual personalities and names.

4/18/21, 8:46 AM
@Hypnothrill oh wow thank you! I'm glad you found it hot, I was too worried it would be a boring first read. I already have most of the characters lined up, chapter 2 coming real soon following the adventures of Brinch :)
Nutiper
4/18/21, 8:09 AM
Something that's so fun about this story is that I can *feel* Charley becoming more and more heads-over-heels in lust with Tyzon — partly because that's the case with *me*, haha, with how your descriptions of him just get increasingly *hot* and specific. Like, Charley's not just obsessed with Tyzon's dick now, he's also fantasizing about his muscular ass too... (Though of course, there's a big hint that Tyzon's ansible is the one that's responsible for that new focus.) Speaking of which, I was really intrigued by the ambiguity where Tyzon says... > “You were explaining how some humans, ‘jocks,’ I believe you called them, sometimes engage in ‘horseplay’ in the showers, including forceful manual stimulation of the gluteal muscles. We tried to replicate this cultural phenomenon..." ...because I realize *Charley never actually says that*. He just thinks it, right? Immediately after Tyzon uses his ansible. Which makes me wonder: can Tyzon read Charley's mind? Or (more likely) is he directly feeding Charley a *lot* of his internal monologue, to the point that Tyzon slips and doesn't notice when Charley didn't actually say something — because Tyzon *knows* that Charley thought it? If so: *whew*. This is a really *hot* and subtle execution of a fun and tricky concept, so bravo.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 8:11 AM
> Attacking political parties I thought wasn’t allowed. I think people forget how homophobic Democrats are. They only pander to gays when it suits them. Please don’t post inflammatory political stuff. 🙄
4/18/21, 5:12 AM
Damn holy fuck now that was most definitely worth the wait...... I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Emit, I mean after that fuck scene and all it promises to be better each time..... fffuuuuccckkk!!!!!! I look forward to reading more about the brothers and what in store for them in playroom Vincent is building..... thank you for this wonderful gift
4/16/21, 7:54 AM
This path is getting better and better!

4/16/21, 8:13 AM
@Udems Aw, thanks! So, what do you like? I'm trying to see what I want to do with this path, because I'm often on it but have no clear storyline besides: "Sam take revenge", and most of my paths have this to an extent, I feel.

4/17/21, 4:35 AM
@BobbyBlobfish I don't see the problem even if the storyline repeats, the important thing is you liking what you do :) What I like? I like big (and/or older) guys falling one by one in his harem, totally amazing on that side. The way you turned the bodybuilder into a lesser man than Sam or this cop into a personal butler that is still "straight", nice. If you wanna ideas of a direction, you can go for the chief of police and more people of power in town to build a safe place where Sam can have everything he might want, his little kingdom lol I would have added the teachers and all that but you are already doing that path on an other story :3

4/17/21, 9:27 PM
@Udems Thank you! I'm trying to have everyone get their own style of enslavement, not sure how long it'll get, but if people don't mind repetition, I guess it'll be fine. It's just that I want to give each path his own style, so a close storyline can be tricky, but I guess they're different enough that people seems to be able to say what happened previously? Police station, hadn't though of that! Great idea! And I guess I should write a bear character. Variety in man, dammit, I wrote too many blonds and not using most of them! And a bear could go plenty of ways...

4/18/21, 4:25 AM
@BobbyBlobfish The how we get to it it was differentiate each path even tho the enslavement can be similar or the same, so don't worry about that! Bear characters? OMG YES, I love bears-like men turned into slave, hairy, big, chubby, there are not many of them around <3 Those and black guys :P You have many places to touch, motorcycles men, mechanics, firemen, politicians... and now the police chief I mentioned before :3 You can also play with fetishes, the bodybuilder had a bit of that with the armpit. A personal favorite is feet but you do you, you are doing an amazing work :3
Mar 13, 2021
4/18/21, 3:41 AM
amazing!
4/18/21, 3:30 AM
This is the hottest story I have ever read.
4/18/21, 2:56 AM
so hot. can't wait to see what happens next