Recent Comments

4/18/21, 12:46 AM
Nice story. Hope to have sequels to reveal the auction and The Sheik.
4/17/21, 11:29 PM
Wonderful and vivid. I love the attention to detail, the personality changes, and the way the sex scenes unfolded. I am good at visualization, and this looked like a high-class art film in my imagination . Bravo!
4/16/21, 7:27 PM
Smol rant: don't really comment on the internet in general but here i go: I absolutely love where the path is going and the general plot of the story (shoutout to @Udems for dat, luv u). This is one of the first, if not the very first, series I read on the site. All the paths I've read were bombs (except Will's path cuz the dude sux) so no doubt I'll love almost all things u guys dish out for the series! Beside that, I also see a lot of "building a harem" from previous paths, not that I'm complaining, so maybe you can go on similar path and go to town with the homophobes or just like turn the police station into a chamber... side note: love path 4 but no one is picking up on it... kinda sad actually for such a good start turns to a dead end...

4/17/21, 4:52 AM
@FHX1 Thank you :3 I wanted to set a simple but steady plot line that could go anywhere so everyone can do whatever they feel like and I'm glad there are people who enjoy writing and those who enjoy reading them <3 Path 4? Yeah, I remember that one, perhaps there are not many into the kind love path? Truth be told, I would love to read more as well, sad I am too lazy to write xD

4/17/21, 9:50 PM
@FHX1 Thanks! Not commenting much on the Internet either, I know how it feels! I wasn't sure if anyone but me cared about this path, so seeing people comment on how they love it is really sweet! It also was one of my first stories I read and I started writing on this series, so If you want to see something or want to start writing, me and Math_Reez want to see more people writing for this series, and I'm always interested in ideas, so don't hesitate! If you want, we can read what you try to write, we read each others stories before publishing to see what we can improve. People want to see more police, eh? Didn't even though of it! I do have several ideas now that I was sent on that path (*snort*) but I have another chapter I'm writing, other stuff I'm doing, but It seems to be on high demand so I'll probably try to make one when I have more time. Thinking about maybe having Leo interact with a police officer to, but as a white person not sure I would do it justice. However, I want to give each path it's own flair, so not sure I'll do another Harem. Now that I think about it... huh, did I make that many harems? I'm not super interested in explicit sex so maybe not in fact =] Not sure, but I don't think it'll be a harem this chapter, I'm going for a household, and a "very" pro-gay neighborhood. Path 4... seems to be the most popular chapter, honestly, only chapter who actually has the little pictures other than "not enough rating." The problem is that the original author has a writer block to finish the chapter he was writing next, and I'm not sure how I could write a worthy follow-up so I'm afraid to pick up the chapter... But I agree it's sad no sequel seems to be happening soon... P. S: And I didn't enjoy writing about Will much because I found him to be awful, so that check out. I think the weakest path I made though was the Chad one. I wouldn't mind somebody "rebooting" it. If you liked something about it, though, I guess I can try to put myself in it, I want to develop Chad, I just had no idea what to do with him and I think it shows.
M
4/17/21, 6:03 PM
Love it so far, very hot to see his internal drama. I hope we will see some kind of character arc for Jake and not only him being dominated by everyone, though is sexy to see this former straight dom being so easily manipulated.
4/17/21, 5:41 PM
Hell yeah! What a great update! 😛😛😛
Gingcub
4/17/21, 11:41 AM
love this and waiting -rock hard- for week two!
4/17/21, 10:46 AM
Love it! Very well written. Great sex scene, and great job building up to it.
4/17/21, 9:54 AM
Loved this story, I have realized all of your previous stories are in my Favourites. I particulary love the idea of spurting your mind out through your cum. Love it Keep the great stories coming.
4/17/21, 9:31 AM
itd be awesome if he body swapped with his son
4/17/21, 6:26 AM
I'm enjoying your story so much. I agree the comment above: perhaps true love can better the spell. I think that the idea of Willem being versatile with Jake and Jake developing his inner surfer self can be a great path to the story. Thanks for writing