Recent Comments

M
4/17/21, 6:03 PM
Love it so far, very hot to see his internal drama. I hope we will see some kind of character arc for Jake and not only him being dominated by everyone, though is sexy to see this former straight dom being so easily manipulated.
4/17/21, 5:41 PM
Hell yeah! What a great update! 😛😛😛
Gingcub
4/17/21, 11:41 AM
love this and waiting -rock hard- for week two!
4/17/21, 10:46 AM
Love it! Very well written. Great sex scene, and great job building up to it.
4/17/21, 9:54 AM
Loved this story, I have realized all of your previous stories are in my Favourites. I particulary love the idea of spurting your mind out through your cum. Love it Keep the great stories coming.
4/17/21, 9:31 AM
itd be awesome if he body swapped with his son
4/17/21, 6:26 AM
I'm enjoying your story so much. I agree the comment above: perhaps true love can better the spell. I think that the idea of Willem being versatile with Jake and Jake developing his inner surfer self can be a great path to the story. Thanks for writing
Geo
4/16/21, 6:24 PM
I hate to over think a fun sexy story, but I hate when a lighthearted sexy story turns into a story where someone is blackmailed into outing themselves or forcibly outed. It just makes me not like the characters doing that, which is too bad for this story cause I kind of dug Jake and Willem up to this point. I can't help but hope the direction swerves with a twist that they don't end up doing that. Also ditto to Taylor about hoping he doesn't lose his muscles. I feel like way too many stories lean too far into sissification/twinkification.

4/17/21, 6:23 AM
@Geo Yay, someone who agrees haha. I mean, don't get me wrong some of those stories are hot and all but...I'm a gay guy that is into men, and a lot of them end up making them extremely feminine with such small dicks that they refer to them as clits, which is just...unfortunate. Granted, I don't really like the whole dick shrinkage thing to start with because the bigger a dick is the better imo, so. And I would normally agree with you about the blackmail thing, but in a case for someone like him...I'm ok with it. He is in a position of power and could help pass laws or encourage sentiment that could get people hurt, or killed, and from the way he treated Willem during their encounter, I feel as if he would eventually end up hurting, killing, or causing the death of someone with his actions, because I mean seriously he suggesting PNPing to an 18 year old that had never done anything harder then weed and alcohol, that...is dangerous. I do however worry that, based on how they had sex, that if they do release the video that he'll claim it was rape...because he was being ridden by Willem and not actively fucking him. Speaking of weed, I find it interesting that it hasn't been mentioned any about Willem smoking anymore since the foursome with his former friends.
4/17/21, 6:13 AM
Another great chapter! The last image in particular--of glass globes of memories shattering--is striking. Plus I love that Willem's character development is going at a reasonable pace: he maintains some of his homophobia and ignorance, and it gets better slowly, not all at once. Maybe true love will break the curse, and Willem will have to face his changed fate!
4/17/21, 4:31 AM
I love your writing style with its blend of sex and humor. It reminds me of Derek Williams'. Very hot chapter!