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4/17/21, 6:13 AM
Another great chapter! The last image in particular--of glass globes of memories shattering--is striking. Plus I love that Willem's character development is going at a reasonable pace: he maintains some of his homophobia and ignorance, and it gets better slowly, not all at once. Maybe true love will break the curse, and Willem will have to face his changed fate!
4/17/21, 4:31 AM
I love your writing style with its blend of sex and humor. It reminds me of Derek Williams'. Very hot chapter!
4/17/21, 4:29 AM
More teachers to the harem, why not? <3 I like adults obeying younger people :3
4/17/21, 4:01 AM
Nice story, but have a few questions? If we're assuming that the story just about men turning into cavemen, when the absence of so many people even in a small town be noticed assuming everyone has access to some form of social media/any trucks drivers going missing/noticing that no one's picking out there delivering? Even if a small town finishes it still leaves a impact on the economy. I know where on Gay spiral stories.com, but what about the women and children in your story did the gas knock them all out, to make them vanish, with such a bad deterrent to them that they left the town. Because the men all suddenly starting the smell then slowly transforming would raise red flags for the rest of the population.
4/17/21, 2:33 AM
I wish you hadnt stopped. This was turning out to be a good series
Pejra
4/17/21, 1:02 AM
I live to serve the
Anonymous
4/17/21, 12:58 AM
who would have thought we had so many republican or "trumplican" readers on this site? this is a very integral part of the story with Willem becoming something more than he was last chapter...aka more gay! thats the point of this story and this site. just because he wrote about a very real problem inside the republican party, it shouldn't take away from the rapid continuation of Willem's conversion in this story.
Lakritz24
4/16/21, 11:28 PM
Have nice thougths too! Thanks for this fantasies and wrothe it! Thinking same things with fused-rubber WITH Leather on over too. J.J.Z.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:05 AM
Attacking political parties I thought wasn't allowed. I think people forget how homophobic Democrats are. They only pander to gays when it suits them. Please don't post inflammatory political stuff.

Martin
4/16/21, 8:41 AM
@Anon: Just because the character is described as a "homophobic republican", the story doesn't imply that all republicans would be homophobic or that non-republicans couldn't be homophobic. I don't see the issue here.

Anonymous
4/16/21, 8:48 AM
lmao, trying to police other people's self-expression ain't a good look sis! Whatever happened to free speech? Also, the story didn't mention democrats even once?

4/16/21, 6:46 PM
Both parties are trash but only one actively tries to strip the rights and freedoms of our fellow LGBTQ+. Don't be daft

Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:12 PM
@ I don't see how it's an "attack" when Hicks is a fictional character and appears to be a composite of a number of Republican politicians who've expressed the exact same view points.

4/16/21, 10:10 PM
@ why should it mention another political party? Not everything has to be artificially bipartisan like the evening news. If the plot demands the takedown of a homophobic politician and you want some local realism, there's really only so many options.
4/16/21, 10:09 PM
This was fantastic, well done. Great pacing, good character work, and a hot scene. looking forward to more!