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Anon
2/11/25, 1:51 AM
And so it ends. The heroes have finally managed to gain safety. And it must have been very cathartic for them to be able to finally take down Leviathan. Leviathan's end was horrifying, but in a tragic way- fitting. He became exactly what those who broke him were like- and hurt a lot of people. He didn't realize he was too overconfident with his powers and that backfired horribly. From what I can tell, he's essentially braindead and likely will remain that way until he dies. His story was tragic, but by the end of it all he really needed to be taken down- he had caused too much damage. I think that's why they can't really gain any sort of satisfaction- just relief that it's over and he can't hurt them anymore. In a way, Leviathan never left that room he was tortured in. It doomed him then, and it doomed him now. At the same time, torture rewires a person and it's pretty clear Leviathan was...not alright in the head after what he went through. But it's very clear whatever affection he had for Colt's father was twisted into something horrible over time. The worst part is that due to how he seems to have had no desire to even change his ways due to being so lost in his own emotional pain and trauma- which is likely immense- how he is now is...probably as good as it can be. Though if he were to regain his senses....he'd probably be a blank slate. That's probably as good as it can get for him- a life free from...all of this. I wonder what the epilogue will be like....

2/11/25, 1:54 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) It wasn't a victory in the sense of a comic book ending...but the chance to keep living and being themselves is the true victory in this case. They've been through Hell because of that man, but now...now they can live knowing he's done...but that doesn't mean it is over...it never is over.
2/10/25, 10:58 PM
This series has been one glorious roller-coaster from start to end! Congratulations on reaching the finishing line! (Yes, I know the epilogue is still to come! :P ) I was pulled in by Colt and Rocky really early on and their appeal stuck right through! Thank you very much for sharing this story and I look forward to _more,...!_

2/11/25, 1:13 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Even if something happens to Chase ;) Thanks for reading...for talking to me about the story and doing some proofreading. I appreciate all you've done.
2/10/25, 4:24 PM
Clever, sexy, and incredibly self-aware. One of the best orgasms I’ve had all week.

2/11/25, 12:59 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) I am so glad it's working as intended haha
2/10/25, 12:21 PM
Loved it, really liked the gradual transitioning. Can’t wait to see more, would be hot to see it in reverse!

2/11/25, 12:58 AM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) Hmmm, a thong that butches you up, I can see the vision
2/11/25, 12:57 AM
Great start.
2/10/25, 9:40 PM
What a FUN story. I loved it. THANK YOU

2/11/25, 12:23 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😉
2/10/25, 8:56 PM
Well. A lot happened there. A lot. And Mr freedom at the end. Interesting. And the pancakes.

2/10/25, 10:35 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Of course there are pancakes! Everything is better with pancakes,... _right?_ :wink:
2/8/25, 3:13 PM
Do you have other stories I can read? I love your writing. Where would I be able to read them?

2/9/25, 7:37 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you so much for your incredible support! Knowing you're enjoying my first foray into writing means the world to me. I'm so excited about the future of this series and have tons of ideas brewing. I really hope you'll stick around to see what's next!

Anonymous
2/10/25, 8:48 PM
@[Dante Mindbender](/user/show/1187235) You are so good at storytelling. I am a FAN!
2/10/25, 8:43 PM
The finale is here. I hope it was enjoyed. There is an epilogue as well. I appreciate any and everyone that has supported me and helped this get done. Thank you for helping me finally finish something!