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4/16/21, 4:26 PM
gotta say, I'm new to the site, but this one's definitely my favorite read yet. Awesome job!
4/16/21, 3:32 PM
it would be pretty interesting if you do something with him sam alexander
Ron
4/16/21, 3:29 PM
Neat little story; could use a bit of tidying up on grammar but it was fun to read.
Ron
4/16/21, 3:29 PM
Neat little story; could use a bit of tidying up on grammar but it was fun to read.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 12:35 PM
I agree that this doesn't seem to attack Republicans. If anything, it's just an overused and unoriginal stereotype of one of the American political parties.
4/16/21, 10:22 AM
I'm excited to see you continuing this series after so many years! The premise here is really hot, as is some of the imagery. My one critique is that I felt like the characterization was too thin in this chapter; we didn't really get to know who Tyler was, and we got very little insight into what he was thinking when he transformed, so his devolution into a caveman had less impact than it could have.

4/16/21, 11:55 AM
@Hypnothrill thanks for the feed back! I really appreciate your insight, especially since I love your stories. I will take that to heart and work a little harder on my next story. Thanks
4/16/21, 7:41 AM
Hot story. hope you do more.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:29 AM
Great story!!
4/16/21, 6:41 AM
This is so good. Thankyou Wesley