Recent Comments

Ron
4/16/21, 3:29 PM
Neat little story; could use a bit of tidying up on grammar but it was fun to read.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 12:35 PM
I agree that this doesn't seem to attack Republicans. If anything, it's just an overused and unoriginal stereotype of one of the American political parties.
4/16/21, 10:22 AM
I'm excited to see you continuing this series after so many years! The premise here is really hot, as is some of the imagery. My one critique is that I felt like the characterization was too thin in this chapter; we didn't really get to know who Tyler was, and we got very little insight into what he was thinking when he transformed, so his devolution into a caveman had less impact than it could have.

4/16/21, 11:55 AM
@Hypnothrill thanks for the feed back! I really appreciate your insight, especially since I love your stories. I will take that to heart and work a little harder on my next story. Thanks
4/16/21, 7:41 AM
Hot story. hope you do more.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:29 AM
Great story!!
4/16/21, 6:41 AM
This is so good. Thankyou Wesley
4/15/21, 9:29 PM
Holy fuck, dude.

Blackjinx123
4/16/21, 4:11 AM
@Dace i'm glad you like it! thanks for reading!
4/16/21, 3:15 AM
Fuck, this is hot. I hoped that the trio of friends would come up again after their introduction in the first chapter and I'm excited to see our accursed bottom's development! Great job, and looking forward to more!
4/16/21, 1:01 AM
amazing, can't wait for the next installment
4/16/21, 12:52 AM
Extremely satisfying please continue these.