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1/30/19, 5:08 AM
love this story.... would like more too.

4/15/21, 1:29 PM
Thank you I'm actually planning on finally finishing part 4 after all these years.@Titan
12/9/20, 5:44 AM
Its too bad this piece never got finished. It's well written.

Steve
4/15/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you so much for that compliment!@Body Odor
Steve
4/15/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you for those who like my story. I know it's been many years since part 3, but I do plan on finishing it soon. I'm not on AOL anymore, so feel free to email me at bearcub27@icloud.com if you have any suggestions or thoughts you would like to share
4/15/21, 11:28 AM
Sooo... What are we going to d about Saul Bennett?
4/15/21, 9:50 AM
A nice piece of transformation writing.
4/15/21, 9:05 AM
Like the other commenter said, an instant classic. Each chapter has been insanely hot & you've done a great job at balancing mind-bendingly erotic sex with plenty of personality in the writing style to make it feel unique and memorable. I know you've gotten feedback for changes in the comments, but honestly I'd say stick to your guns & stay true to your initial vision, what you've done so far has been fantastic & I can't wait to see how it pans out. My only sadness is it will be 10 chapters not 100!
Jon
4/15/21, 3:46 AM
Please do more it is good.
4/15/21, 3:40 AM
please do continue
Elm
4/13/21, 9:12 PM
It was amazing!

Blackjinx123
4/15/21, 2:41 AM
@Elm thank you!
Anonymous
4/15/21, 12:10 AM
I was wondering the other day what was gonna happen next in this story. So glad to see it again!