Recent Comments

Steve
4/15/21, 1:27 PM
Thank you for those who like my story. I know it's been many years since part 3, but I do plan on finishing it soon. I'm not on AOL anymore, so feel free to email me at bearcub27@icloud.com if you have any suggestions or thoughts you would like to share
4/15/21, 11:28 AM
Sooo... What are we going to d about Saul Bennett?
4/15/21, 9:50 AM
A nice piece of transformation writing.
4/15/21, 9:05 AM
Like the other commenter said, an instant classic. Each chapter has been insanely hot & you've done a great job at balancing mind-bendingly erotic sex with plenty of personality in the writing style to make it feel unique and memorable. I know you've gotten feedback for changes in the comments, but honestly I'd say stick to your guns & stay true to your initial vision, what you've done so far has been fantastic & I can't wait to see how it pans out. My only sadness is it will be 10 chapters not 100!
Jon
4/15/21, 3:46 AM
Please do more it is good.
4/15/21, 3:40 AM
please do continue
Elm
4/13/21, 9:12 PM
It was amazing!

Blackjinx123
4/15/21, 2:41 AM
@Elm thank you!
Anonymous
4/15/21, 12:10 AM
I was wondering the other day what was gonna happen next in this story. So glad to see it again!
4/15/21, 12:06 AM
would luv to read what happens next but i would like to know the backstory on how the person got mickey in the first place & maybe a lil bit more on the captor...but all in all is quite good, but needs a lil work....i give it a 3/5.
Apr 11, 2021
4/14/21, 10:02 PM
I loved this and can't wait for the next part!!! great job Hypnothrill!