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4/14/21, 10:40 AM
short,but sweet. liking this series so far
4/14/21, 10:39 AM
Another great story from Wesley Bracken
3/27/21, 3:37 AM
This seems headed in incredibly hot directons!

4/14/21, 9:53 AM
If only I had finished it...@FreeThinker
4/14/21, 9:01 AM
This is so fucking hot. Hope there are many chapters to come!
3/12/21, 9:00 AM
Intriguing start! As for the "devices", I'd prefer if you were clearer in description - if it looks like a shower, say it looked like a shower, it will help imagining it. :-)

4/14/21, 8:15 AM
it is a showe! Looks like the thing "taken" was the world's knowledge of what a shower is @Delicious1papaya
4/11/21, 6:32 PM
one of your best stories yet!!

4/14/21, 6:55 AM
@FreewillFL Thanks. Glad you liked it.
4/14/21, 1:20 AM
You write so well that I hope you would go your own way on the story.
4/14/21, 12:43 AM
So good. I felt bad for Eli in one paragraph, and then hated the, what did you call him, Douche canoe (LOL) in the next. And his internal struggle was done beautifully, esp as the middle child. I'm glad you made him eat ass, and then like it. Maybe even consider, "and you really like unshowered, acrid scented hole." I hope he turns into an ass eating whore, starting every morning in the kitchen with Dad and bros before they shower, coffee and ass. . Oops, getting carried away with your story, apologies. It is a testament to how well you get the mind going with this story.