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4/13/21, 10:06 PM
The near-miss, where they inadvertently touch hands, is, to me, really hot. Looking forward to reading where they go!
4/13/21, 10:05 PM
This story is really good! I really enjoyed the stinky pits and dumbing down. Great job!
4/13/21, 9:55 PM
This is really exciting, and really well-written! The induction at the start, and Finn's self-doubt about his trance-ability, are very vivid and convincing. I'm eager to read what happens to him!
4/13/21, 6:25 PM
This continuation is just as great as the first chapter. I remain eager to see what changes will continue to happen between Norman and Warren. The sex scene was super hot. I kind of want to see Norman and Warren with other men now. Or have a threesome. As well as more reality changes. In any case, I look forward to the next part.

4/13/21, 9:04 PM
@Proteus Thanks for taking the time to comment and share your encouragement! We've got chapter 3 (the end of Warren's sordid little tale, I'm afraid) cocked and ready to go later this week, so you won't wait long to see if your words have rearranged reality to make your dreams come true. Though, for all you know, they were already true to start with... :D
Jul 18, 2016
4/13/21, 8:43 PM
very nice so far. hope this is only the first part. i would like to read more. it has a lit of potential & is very promising. 殺
Anonymous
4/13/21, 8:26 PM
More please more
4/13/21, 7:37 PM
LOVED this chapter. dumb authority figures like doctors and cops are my thing,I love it. can't wait to see how's it going in the bunker. and maybe more of the TV Station,too? some dumb hosts sound nice
4/13/21, 7:25 PM
I'm waiting to see more of somnus before seeing if I'm interested in writing for this universe, but it seems promising.
4/13/21, 6:05 PM
Story gets hotter with each chapter! Keep them coming man!
4/13/21, 5:49 PM
I love this story. I've come back to it a couple times now, and each time I like it more. The world building is fantastic, and I really like how the reality warper doesn't have complete control of everything. I do want to learn more about Warren, though. What other people has he changed? What was his time like as an artist and a masseur? All in all, this is hot, and I'll be following this series for sure.