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4/14/21, 1:20 AM
You write so well that I hope you would go your own way on the story.
4/14/21, 12:43 AM
So good. I felt bad for Eli in one paragraph, and then hated the, what did you call him, Douche canoe (LOL) in the next. And his internal struggle was done beautifully, esp as the middle child. I'm glad you made him eat ass, and then like it. Maybe even consider, "and you really like unshowered, acrid scented hole." I hope he turns into an ass eating whore, starting every morning in the kitchen with Dad and bros before they shower, coffee and ass. . Oops, getting carried away with your story, apologies. It is a testament to how well you get the mind going with this story.
CigarMuscle
4/14/21, 12:13 AM
hell yea buddy! great start!!
Anonymous
4/13/21, 11:51 PM
Please make more. This is an awesome story!
4/13/21, 10:30 PM
I agree with Martin -- a wonderful conclusion. It's also really hot when Isaac feels the influence of the suit!
4/13/21, 10:16 PM
This is like missed opportunities I've experienced myself--and how, each time, I'd wished in retrospect they'd gone! Awesome writing again!
4/13/21, 10:06 PM
The near-miss, where they inadvertently touch hands, is, to me, really hot. Looking forward to reading where they go!
4/13/21, 10:05 PM
This story is really good! I really enjoyed the stinky pits and dumbing down. Great job!