Recent Comments

Elm
4/13/21, 2:30 PM
Yes! another one! I really like this series! Since we now saw what happened to a "Smart Guy" after the last change, I would love to see what happened to a simpler dude haha. I also wonder whats going on with the men st the underground bunker...
Anonymous
4/13/21, 1:01 PM
This was an amazing story! I really hope we get to see more!
4/13/21, 5:46 AM
So glad to see you continue this! I'm loving the slow changes, and I hope we get some more scenes of this dumb, happy, and horny world!

4/13/21, 12:32 PM
@Hypnothrill Glad that you're enjoying the series. Looking forward to bringing you more dumb, happy and horny stories! I'm a huge fan of your work so the compliment really means a lot :)
4/13/21, 10:46 AM
Great story. It's was worth waiting for. I'm looking forward to seeing your next stories 😃
Apr 11, 2021
4/13/21, 6:53 AM
Can't wait till his sons get implants.
Apr 11, 2021
BPtime
4/13/21, 6:06 AM
Don't keep us waiting. We want to see the thing spread.
jimbor
4/13/21, 5:37 AM
Awesome story. I would love to see Willem forced to give up expensive preppy straight guy clothes and shoes - and maybe get a suitable haircut! -
4/13/21, 5:32 AM
Please continue! It's getting interesting.
boi98229
4/13/21, 5:22 AM
Wow! You got a lot of good comments! I really enjoyed this story too. i love the characters, and like GrowingGeek, loved the pace and nature of Kevin's transformation. I thought the whole thing and all the characters were really adorable. i had a smile through most of the story, but it was so sexy too. In spite of the odd government requirement, the story and the relationships flowed very naturally. Thanks so much!
4/12/21, 8:32 PM
I think this is intended to be romantic, but it feels like Dave the cop essentially murdered Jamie and felt no remorse about it.

4/13/21, 12:29 AM
@Hypnothrill and @Stroppy Author I changed the story a tad bit so that it could flow better and there was more reasoning to things

4/13/21, 3:11 AM
@lthrbootguy Really, you don't have to change a story to please someone who comes up with what THEY'D like or what would please THEM. This does help me a bit but ultimately, these stories are your expression, so please don't feel compelled to change them based on a couple of feedback notes unless you strongly agree. .

4/13/21, 4:20 AM
@Stroppy Author I agree with you in principle that writers don't need to change their stories just to please specific commenters on here, who can be overly picky sometimes. But I think the changes that lthrbootguy made really do help the story a lot, making Dave's actions seem more justified and Jamie's fate seem less horrific.