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boi98229
4/13/21, 5:22 AM
Wow! You got a lot of good comments! I really enjoyed this story too. i love the characters, and like GrowingGeek, loved the pace and nature of Kevin's transformation. I thought the whole thing and all the characters were really adorable. i had a smile through most of the story, but it was so sexy too. In spite of the odd government requirement, the story and the relationships flowed very naturally. Thanks so much!
4/12/21, 8:32 PM
I think this is intended to be romantic, but it feels like Dave the cop essentially murdered Jamie and felt no remorse about it.

4/13/21, 12:29 AM
@Hypnothrill and @Stroppy Author I changed the story a tad bit so that it could flow better and there was more reasoning to things

4/13/21, 3:11 AM
@lthrbootguy Really, you don't have to change a story to please someone who comes up with what THEY'D like or what would please THEM. This does help me a bit but ultimately, these stories are your expression, so please don't feel compelled to change them based on a couple of feedback notes unless you strongly agree. .

4/13/21, 4:20 AM
@Stroppy Author I agree with you in principle that writers don't need to change their stories just to please specific commenters on here, who can be overly picky sometimes. But I think the changes that lthrbootguy made really do help the story a lot, making Dave's actions seem more justified and Jamie's fate seem less horrific.
Apr 11, 2021
4/13/21, 3:31 AM
excellent. looking forward to next part.
Jay
4/13/21, 3:13 AM
Really enjoying this story, it is fantastic. So often erotic stories sacrifice character development for sex scenes but you have masterfully combined both. I'm definitely on board for more of Willem's trials and tribulations. I did think this chapter missed a trick by not having the cop shove that nightstick inside Willem while he was fucking him - I love DP scenes and the one with Josh and the twins was over all too soon for my liking! I don't know if you'd consider a spot of fisting - I can envision a scene where Josh and/or the twins inflict that on Willem. And I would really like to see Willem publicly humiliated - wearing skimpy clothing, coerced into nude modeling or porn if he wants to get the dick that he wants. Desperation for dick could easily be the lever for guys to push him into stuff like that, especially if they know he's homophobic and a bully.
Apr 11, 2021
4/13/21, 2:47 AM
Great history and a have many pictures of alien parasites, you want to see?
Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
4/13/21, 1:20 AM
Hot story with a lot of room for continuing! Looking forward to daddy Chuck spreading his gift to his boys!
4/12/21, 10:09 PM
Definitely love how the story is going. I will say I think Willem's character development might be rushed just a tad. We're at 94 more tops and he is already kind is okay with being a bottom. It seems like to me he should have much more inner turmoil trying to reconcile how pleasurable he finds the sex, with how he sees himself and where he wants to be after meeting the requirements of the curse. That, plus his budding relationship with Jake, will make it much more believable that he's worked through these issues if your plan is to make him stay gay. I do like how you are showing that he cannot simply return to the status quo and how maybe he social becomes kind of trapped being gay, so even if he wanted to go back, it's more complicated. I also think that the curse should come with some more unexpected conditions and loopholes. For example, it could be a hot ending where he never bottoms for 100 different guys because he falls in love with Jake and accepts that he will never go back to the way he was, but is not punished by the curse. Or have Jake start to be affected by the curse if he and Willem keep fucking. Like Jake becomes super dominant and masculine, while Willem does the opposite. Anyway, I think this story is incredible and you have a real knack for writing. If I was going to have the story go anywhere, Willem likely needs to start dressing and looking (maybe sounding) more gay. If he is a surfer, make his new suit of choice a speedo. Maybe he is forced to shave his body. Maybe he hooks up with a UCLA frat bro and goes into college with everyone thinking he's gay (again he gets trapped in the socialization that he's gay). So many hot options! Keep them coming!

4/13/21, 1:12 AM
@randomcreativename I definitely have plans for the next chapter for some fun changes to Willem's clothes! Boxers can only cut it for so long. I've also got plans for more of Willem's pushback to the changes going on in his mind and body, because although he's learning the joys of gay sex, that nasty little poison pill of heterosexuality within him is going to prove tough to stamp out. Also, although he has to fuck 100 guys, ultimately I have plotted this story out to be a 10-chapter series. So we are about halfway through now.
4/12/21, 9:54 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill. However, a way around this is for Jamie and Dave to awaken together and they become an etherial threesome, or they time share or...
4/12/21, 5:36 PM
I cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope Marky's boss is the one to see Marky and demotes him down to Zane's secretary.
Zai
4/12/21, 5:15 PM
Wow! I really enjoy Speedo clad sex; that extremely thin, silky feel material tightly wrapped around one's hips, ass and bulge. When a lover/fucker plows your manpussy as you both wear the racer briefs, the mix of steamy, aroused flesh and lycra/spandex co-mingling to bring you to the heights of near depraved pleasures. As he OWNS your most intimate area(s), turning your ass into an erotic playground. And you, dear author, wrote that so very, very, very, very well in this chapter! Thank you! Ash made Jese HIS BITCH WHORE BOTTOM BOI-TOY SLUT SO DECIDEDLY, SO CUNNINGLY. Tasty delights abounded!