Recent Comments

4/13/21, 5:46 AM
So glad to see you continue this! I'm loving the slow changes, and I hope we get some more scenes of this dumb, happy, and horny world!

4/13/21, 12:32 PM
@Hypnothrill Glad that you're enjoying the series. Looking forward to bringing you more dumb, happy and horny stories! I'm a huge fan of your work so the compliment really means a lot :)
4/13/21, 10:46 AM
Great story. It's was worth waiting for. I'm looking forward to seeing your next stories 😃
Apr 11, 2021
4/13/21, 6:53 AM
Can't wait till his sons get implants.
Apr 11, 2021
BPtime
4/13/21, 6:06 AM
Don't keep us waiting. We want to see the thing spread.
jimbor
4/13/21, 5:37 AM
Awesome story. I would love to see Willem forced to give up expensive preppy straight guy clothes and shoes - and maybe get a suitable haircut! -
4/13/21, 5:32 AM
Please continue! It's getting interesting.
boi98229
4/13/21, 5:22 AM
Wow! You got a lot of good comments! I really enjoyed this story too. i love the characters, and like GrowingGeek, loved the pace and nature of Kevin's transformation. I thought the whole thing and all the characters were really adorable. i had a smile through most of the story, but it was so sexy too. In spite of the odd government requirement, the story and the relationships flowed very naturally. Thanks so much!
4/12/21, 8:32 PM
I think this is intended to be romantic, but it feels like Dave the cop essentially murdered Jamie and felt no remorse about it.

4/13/21, 12:29 AM
@Hypnothrill and @Stroppy Author I changed the story a tad bit so that it could flow better and there was more reasoning to things

4/13/21, 3:11 AM
@lthrbootguy Really, you don't have to change a story to please someone who comes up with what THEY'D like or what would please THEM. This does help me a bit but ultimately, these stories are your expression, so please don't feel compelled to change them based on a couple of feedback notes unless you strongly agree. .

4/13/21, 4:20 AM
@Stroppy Author I agree with you in principle that writers don't need to change their stories just to please specific commenters on here, who can be overly picky sometimes. But I think the changes that lthrbootguy made really do help the story a lot, making Dave's actions seem more justified and Jamie's fate seem less horrific.
Apr 11, 2021
4/13/21, 3:31 AM
excellent. looking forward to next part.
Jay
4/13/21, 3:13 AM
Really enjoying this story, it is fantastic. So often erotic stories sacrifice character development for sex scenes but you have masterfully combined both. I'm definitely on board for more of Willem's trials and tribulations. I did think this chapter missed a trick by not having the cop shove that nightstick inside Willem while he was fucking him - I love DP scenes and the one with Josh and the twins was over all too soon for my liking! I don't know if you'd consider a spot of fisting - I can envision a scene where Josh and/or the twins inflict that on Willem. And I would really like to see Willem publicly humiliated - wearing skimpy clothing, coerced into nude modeling or porn if he wants to get the dick that he wants. Desperation for dick could easily be the lever for guys to push him into stuff like that, especially if they know he's homophobic and a bully.