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Apr 11, 2021
4/12/21, 6:40 AM
I'm incredibly intrigued. I can't wait to see what further pleasures the Infestation brings to their hosts.
4/12/21, 5:50 AM
Looking forward to next chapter and the get together with neighbor.
4/12/21, 4:34 AM
bloody fantastic
Apr 11, 2021
Willie Cici
4/12/21, 3:06 AM
The beginning of what I'm sure will be an incredible series. Damn!! I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Apr 11, 2021
Gasuda
4/12/21, 3:00 AM
Good start! Maybe you could have further modifications to the hosts over time the longer they have a parasite hijacking their body? We don't have a lot of insect stuff on here, and it would be interesting to see some heavy transformation with this.
Apr 11, 2021
4/12/21, 2:22 AM
this has amazing promise to be one of your best stories yet! :-)
4/12/21, 12:57 AM
wow this was so absolutely awesome. Your writing is wonderful, and the development of hypnosis is so delightful. Love it!
4/11/21, 11:25 PM
Oh wow this is super hot :3 Great job!
4/11/21, 7:50 PM
I see this is the first story you have posted to GSS, so I want to offer some constructive criticism. For your next story, make sure to have: 1. Multiple paragraphs 2. Multiple distinct characters This will make a world of difference when it comes to getting readers invested in the fictional universe you've created.

4/11/21, 8:47 PM
@HypnothrillThanks!
Apr 11, 2021
4/11/21, 8:35 PM
A fascinating story that perfectly captures that Hypnothrill patented blend of horror and sexiness. I think the fear comes from both the symbolic nature of STIs (the thought that sex could totally transform you) and the natural human phobia of "infection" of all kinds, especially insects (we even call germs "bugs"). The mental transformation aspects are my favorite! :D Keep it up, Hypnothrill!