Recent Comments

2/10/25, 2:58 PM
Not even into feet and this turned me, so so hot, brilliant writing, great job
2/10/25, 2:31 PM
Really enjoyed his change to who he should be
2/10/25, 2:04 PM
Insanely hot!
2/10/25, 9:57 AM
Amazing work! I have a suit and tie fetish and a dose of humiliation! So this story hits all the right spots! Would love to read more on men like this being enslaved and brainwashed. More description of suits and ties would an extra bonus for sure! Nonetheless it would be a great read if Jason can be an accomplice in enslaving business acquaintances or friends just like him and introducing them to the Barber. Nice! Can't wait to read more!
A very pleased reader
2/9/25, 11:59 PM
Amazing! As always! You make such a great job at creating your characters. The way you settle their personalities before the fun always makes things hotter, though Id point it out :)

2/10/25, 7:04 AM
@A very pleased reader Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the kind comment about characterization. I do my best!:satisfied:
2/10/25, 6:37 AM
Hot stuff!
Anonymous
2/10/25, 6:18 AM
I would love a continuation. Although I must admit a continuation with a bit more expansion into everyone. Poor John didn’t get a lot of exposition.
2/10/25, 5:57 AM
I hope you continue!
2/10/25, 5:45 AM
I hope you start writing again. Love your work
2/8/25, 8:08 PM
I like the concept, and the idea is amazingly fresh. I did get hard reading this and I look forward to the next chapters! There are some minor issues, though, and I'd recommend using Grammarly or a similar tool if you're struggling with grammar and spelling.

2/10/25, 5:36 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I hate Grammarly because I normally write better than Grammarly does but, like I said, I was very sick when I wrote what I wrote and I have been working on a rewrite, now that I'm feeling better. When I wrote the original post, I had stuff coming out both ends at the same time. I too can now see some of the POV switches, passive voice and wordiness.