I've been laying low and working on some stories. Sometimes you need a rest. Output for output sake usually creates crap. Writing stories is but one step. Editing and refining is the hard work. Thanks for the comments, especially from H-thrill!! He's a consummate professional when it comes to this genre. The younger writers should take head to his work and emulate his hard work.

hope this continues!!

Love this series, looks like its reaching its conclusion but I hope you keep writing!

oh im so excited! it's a classic setup, but i can clearly see your own voice/special spin on it so none of it feels stale. plus all the character voices are really distinctive and fun, and in addition to being really hot the moments of comedy definitely had me giggling. this is exactly up my street, and i'll be waiting with baited breath for more!!!

This was fantastic! Loving this

yes, please dont end the story here. its one of my favorite series. I know its a different author than the original story; but the plot has remained seamless. maybe one day ill write a piece now.

Excellent! The boyfriend becomes the slutty whore -- and his daddy can make any changes he wants and make him do and feel anything he wants! To be controlled like that would be the dream of a lifetime!

Really fun story, and well done! Super interested to see where you take it next.

Fantastic story, can't wait for future installments.

This story literally kept me awake last night. I read it, came, then spent two hours lying awake unable to sleep because I was thinking about it. I had to come back to the site, read other stuff, come AGAIN, and then I could sleep. My favourite thing about this story is the way the reader works through Elijah's changing thought process alongside him. I have never seen such a huge personality shift as the selfless/selfish turn arranged in such a hot way. Managing to express that in a way that made sense AND was super erotic was some really great work. The emphasis on the wrong-ness of it, and how we continually returned to a change in character that Elijah was aware of for the rest of the story made it incredibly hot. I think what some folks here in the comments are picking up on with regard to the descriptors was symptomatic of a lack of physicality in the story. We spend a lot of time in Elijah's head seeing his reactions to changes. What we could use a bit more of in this story is to dive in to the physical changes taking place whenever we get outside of his head. And I understand why that didn't happen here: this story is long! (and also that doesn't necessarily seem to be what specifically gets you off, which is totally fair) Unlike in Texting Twinks, where a lot of physical description was carried by the texts, in this story the characters are more often present in a scene, meaning that readers expect the prose to carry the weight of describing how their behaviour is shifting in scene. It doesn't have a serious impact on reading the story (more physical description might actually have harmed my experience in this story, it's so well balanced as it is) but it's what I noticed. This is definitely a new favourite story of mine, and I can't believe I didn't read it during the contest! I do have a question: was this meant to read as Les Miserables fanfiction? The character group really felt like Les Amis de l'ABC to me, and now I want to do a version of this with those character dynamics.