yes, please dont end the story here. its one of my favorite series. I know its a different author than the original story; but the plot has remained seamless. maybe one day ill write a piece now.

Excellent! The boyfriend becomes the slutty whore -- and his daddy can make any changes he wants and make him do and feel anything he wants! To be controlled like that would be the dream of a lifetime!

Really fun story, and well done! Super interested to see where you take it next.

Fantastic story, can't wait for future installments.

This story literally kept me awake last night. I read it, came, then spent two hours lying awake unable to sleep because I was thinking about it. I had to come back to the site, read other stuff, come AGAIN, and then I could sleep. My favourite thing about this story is the way the reader works through Elijah's changing thought process alongside him. I have never seen such a huge personality shift as the selfless/selfish turn arranged in such a hot way. Managing to express that in a way that made sense AND was super erotic was some really great work. The emphasis on the wrong-ness of it, and how we continually returned to a change in character that Elijah was aware of for the rest of the story made it incredibly hot. I think what some folks here in the comments are picking up on with regard to the descriptors was symptomatic of a lack of physicality in the story. We spend a lot of time in Elijah's head seeing his reactions to changes. What we could use a bit more of in this story is to dive in to the physical changes taking place whenever we get outside of his head. And I understand why that didn't happen here: this story is long! (and also that doesn't necessarily seem to be what specifically gets you off, which is totally fair) Unlike in Texting Twinks, where a lot of physical description was carried by the texts, in this story the characters are more often present in a scene, meaning that readers expect the prose to carry the weight of describing how their behaviour is shifting in scene. It doesn't have a serious impact on reading the story (more physical description might actually have harmed my experience in this story, it's so well balanced as it is) but it's what I noticed. This is definitely a new favourite story of mine, and I can't believe I didn't read it during the contest! I do have a question: was this meant to read as Les Miserables fanfiction? The character group really felt like Les Amis de l'ABC to me, and now I want to do a version of this with those character dynamics.

i loved this

Grrrr. Who's the guy that didn't pick up the phone and rescue his boi. I just wanna know. *\*cracks knuckles**

This story was utterly amazing

This is just so good. I wish the dad will be turned into a full slave

Heres to another 99 chapters! ;)