Recent Comments

4/9/21, 10:25 AM
This series is really fucking hot. Please keep it up.
CigarMuscle
4/9/21, 10:08 AM
Right Absman420?! Man, I shot a huge load reading this one!
Anonymous
4/9/21, 8:59 AM
Just re-read this amazing story, it’s so good. I really hope that you continue writing - either this or something else that grabs you - and I hope you’re having as much fun writing as we are reading it :)
Mike
4/9/21, 7:37 AM
I think Alex got off to easy, like if Cody didn't make him do all that stuff & Aidan told him he was gay, he wouldve started bulling him & probably out him to the whole school, he is not a good guy, he's been a bully all his life & treated his brother like shit cause he was gay plus pushed around anybody that was smaller then him, cody humbled his ass so he could accept Aidan, I dont like that Aidan was blind to all of this like alex was a good person that didn't hurt anyone, even nick he bullied until nick got big enough to defend himself then made him a rival like it was nick that started the rivalry between them, I wish Aidan wouldve told him he was gay before cody put the collar on him so he could see how his friend wouldve truly felt about him being gay before he got humbled then he wouldn't have painted it like cody was the bad guy here, cody broke him down so he would be more accepting of other people & think twice about bulling someone again, like cody chose to stop after alex got the collar off, he had all the picture still he couldve used to keep alex as his slave without thr collar but decided he learned his lesson & let him go
boi98229
4/9/21, 7:26 AM
Hot story. i agree with Dogdaes that this story felt very very real. Still, while i don't mind giving up cash to a worthy Alpha, i have enough need for my own cash that findom makes me nervous. Even though it felt right that this Alpha be obeyed and served, i still really sweated over the findom! Another personal preference i have is to be able to put a name to each significant character. i guess for me story characters seem more individual and real if they have names. i can relate to them more easily as an individual.
boi98229
4/9/21, 6:14 AM
OMG i hope someday to be taken to such an amazing place with an amazing Man such our hero and commit to be owned by Him. Such a sizzling hot story! Gotta read on!! No time to say hello! Goodbye! Goodbye! Goodbye! i need to fall down the rabbit hole!
boi98229
4/9/21, 6:01 AM
@Cracker - i would love to chat with you sometime about your apparent love of being dominated by a Black Man. (This is the first story by you that i have read, so may be presuming too much. Your choice of author id though seems to confirm.) i totally relate to the main character, and love his story of transformation. Acculturation in the white suburbs can be hard to overcome. Thanks for your story and your sharing. Interestingly i notice that most of the character development is with the main character, understandable since the story is told from his point of view. What i am really missing is the character development for the Black Alpha and their developing D/s relationship (i presume and hope!) i need to read on, but will comment again down the line i'm sure.
Gasuda
4/9/21, 5:05 AM
How are there not more comments on this story? This is great, man, and I look forward to reading more!
Anonymous
4/9/21, 4:17 AM
This was so hot!! I'm looking forward to the next one.
4/9/21, 4:13 AM
Keep em coming!