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nobody
11/29/22, 10:07 PM
loved it but the tf felt a bit rushed. other than that amazing

11/30/22, 11:13 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Agreed. It’s a scene to be savored, especially on a site like this. My only other note is that there was a stretch of dialogue in a single paragraph. That made it seem like just one person was speaking that whole time. You need to have a new line each time someone else says something. Other than all that, this was great!

12/1/22, 5:44 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Thanks for the positive comment! My hope was that the tf would kind of unfurl like a climax itself, but I definitely can see based on what you and Programming Prince were saying that it's kind of brushing over the part people want to read. It's definitely given me some thoughts for how to approach revisions/future writing!

12/1/22, 5:49 AM
@[Programming Prince](/user/show/183115) I appreciate the note re: extending the focus on the tf and breaking up the dialogue. I re-read it back with that in mind and can see how it read confusingly!

Anonymous
2/10/25, 3:14 AM
@[CatherineOfBearagon](/user/show/10005930) So loved it for sure. Wishful thinking. Giggles. Being mtf myself. But can imagine they'll be more chapters to add to this, as a possibility. Nice writing regardless for sure
Staci39Z1
2/10/25, 3:02 AM
Like O.M.G., sign me up please. Maybe shorter story, but guessing chapters can be added. Such a torn on for sure. Loved it
2/10/25, 2:44 AM
Love this story so much! Can’t wait for more!
2/10/25, 2:37 AM
Amazing and creative story!
2/10/25, 1:44 AM
Such a hot story. Lucky Luke is right where he belongs, taking massive black dicks.
2/9/25, 11:38 PM
Damn! Why did I have to read this story πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ wish I would have waited until more chapters were published, because all I want to do is read more πŸ˜‚
2/9/25, 11:17 PM
Love it, remind me of my fav author 'TS'
2/9/25, 10:32 PM
Very nice.
2/9/25, 7:51 PM
Everytime I think I've read the hottest chapter of this story, you somehow find a way to top yourself by releasing an even hotter one. Adored this, and can't wait to see where things go from here.