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4/8/21, 5:36 AM
oh my... I love the accidently commands 💙💙💙💙💙
Nutiper
4/8/21, 3:22 AM
Oh *damn* okay I'm glad you added that full blowjob scene back in, because *wow?!* But also: this chapter flows *so well* with the full scene back in. It makes other moments in the chapter click together properly, and yeah, I think that putting the full scene back in was the right choice. Also I'm uh particularly enamored by really well-written BJ fantasies and *boy* did that deliver... Aside from the sheer imaginative hotness of all the descriptions, I also just love how we're still in Charley's head the whole time — seeing and experiencing it all from his distinct and slightly-zany POV. This story's sheer sense of fun is such a highlight, for me, and one of the things I've been loving about this story in general.
4/8/21, 2:55 AM
this has been one of the most enjoyable series Ive read in years!!
4/7/21, 11:34 PM
Fun, but I felt bad for Jake at the end.

4/8/21, 12:21 AM
Trust me, Jake is very much a long term part of this story! @Derek Williams

4/8/21, 2:50 AM
@Freckleman64 Awesome! Looking forward to reading more :)
4/8/21, 1:38 AM
Awesome first chapter! I'm happy to hear that Jake will remain part of this story.
Anonymous
4/8/21, 12:58 AM
This was awesome!! I can't wait for the next chapter. whatever happens is going to be hot
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4/8/21, 12:36 AM
I LOVE this story! I can't wait for the next stripper segment and inevitable sex. You should make them enjoy putting on the next show! Good luck to ya!
Tyrol
3/29/21, 6:25 PM
@Underwearguy72 you are so right I should definitely talk about their underwear more. I will make sure to include it in the descriptions in the future.

Underwearguy72
3/30/21, 12:22 PM
Thanks so much. I think it will add a really hot element to the story and there is even some humiliation elements that you could add to it based on that. Can't wait for your next chapter. @Tyrol

4/7/21, 11:44 PM
yes I agree with underwearguy72. that is super hot! Humiliation for frat bros what could be better??Your story is so great. I am looking forward to the up and cumming chapters! :) comment@Undewearguy72
4/7/21, 11:42 PM
I like how "Nooo, its inmoral" but when its about him gaining its "Yeeees" xD
kuro
4/7/21, 10:35 PM
Man, this just keeps getting better and better! This entire chapter was a tour de force - especially the bit where Charley coached Tyzon through how to do a proper blowjob scene in a *totally* straight way. I think it's the earnestness that really elevates this entire fic to a new level for me; you're doing a brilliant job. Really well done!