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hypnoboi
4/8/21, 2:22 PM
Oh my gosh I'm like a year late to the party, but I remember reading the first part of this story when it first came out and didn't realize there was a second part! I totally just binged the whole thing in one sitting lmao This is so good though I love your writing and can't wait to see what your next story is! I know you said you might do things with this story in the future, if you don't mind dropping any hints, will we maybe be seeing more of real Nathan in the future? My boy has really been put through the ringer and I just want good things for him.
4/8/21, 11:41 AM
For Mac's part, why not just make him gay and coming over for some fun from time to time, I think that is fair
EJG
4/8/21, 9:25 AM
That was great
4/8/21, 5:36 AM
oh my... I love the accidently commands 💙💙💙💙💙
Nutiper
4/8/21, 3:22 AM
Oh *damn* okay I'm glad you added that full blowjob scene back in, because *wow?!* But also: this chapter flows *so well* with the full scene back in. It makes other moments in the chapter click together properly, and yeah, I think that putting the full scene back in was the right choice. Also I'm uh particularly enamored by really well-written BJ fantasies and *boy* did that deliver... Aside from the sheer imaginative hotness of all the descriptions, I also just love how we're still in Charley's head the whole time — seeing and experiencing it all from his distinct and slightly-zany POV. This story's sheer sense of fun is such a highlight, for me, and one of the things I've been loving about this story in general.
4/8/21, 2:55 AM
this has been one of the most enjoyable series Ive read in years!!
4/7/21, 11:34 PM
Fun, but I felt bad for Jake at the end.

4/8/21, 12:21 AM
Trust me, Jake is very much a long term part of this story! @Derek Williams

4/8/21, 2:50 AM
@Freckleman64 Awesome! Looking forward to reading more :)
4/8/21, 1:38 AM
Awesome first chapter! I'm happy to hear that Jake will remain part of this story.
Anonymous
4/8/21, 12:58 AM
This was awesome!! I can't wait for the next chapter. whatever happens is going to be hot
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4/8/21, 12:36 AM
I LOVE this story! I can't wait for the next stripper segment and inevitable sex. You should make them enjoy putting on the next show! Good luck to ya!