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4/5/21, 8:06 AM
loved the revisit and am thrilled for everything that comes next
Oct 16, 2006
jimbor
4/5/21, 7:28 AM
Love this story. Especially when Tom can no longer speak English and he is forced to say he is not Tom Brady. I agree that there should be a sequel. Maybe have Tom return to his own body but with the changes to his personality and history. He can no longer speak English. His education is gone. He has lost his confidence. He doesn't think he deserves to wear expensive suits or his uniform
4/5/21, 5:44 AM
I cannot believe I missed this addition to your wonderful series the Gentlemans Club. This prequel is very clever and though dark pushes quite a few of my buttons. Bravo Sir.
Martin
2/1/20, 9:58 AM
AbsMan420, thank you so much, coming from you that means a lot to me :) Firesix, see, how I'm blushing: ## 😊 Let's see what will happen to Steff and Alec. I actually can't wait to get my ideas on "paper" :) Thank you all for those encouraging comments!

4/5/21, 3:24 AM
@Martin hey still waiting for part 2 😅

Martin
4/5/21, 5:43 AM
@Pakibttm Thank you, that's nice to here that there are still people waiting for this. I'm horrible at finishing my stories, I know. This morning I had a *very* intense and hot half-sleep fantasy while wanking my morning wood. I think I have to get it written down asap to get it out of my system... It's not a continuation of this story, but if you liked it, you will probably like this short one-shot I'm planning to write today, too.
Apr 1, 2021
4/4/21, 8:22 PM
Wow, this was great! Sorry I didn't discover this until now. It's really amazing to have inspired a story like this, to get to reread the original piece I dreamed up as it would be written by a talented author like you. And the additions you made were really hot as well! Consider this my permission to you to write a remake of any of my other stories as well, if you're interested. Hoping to get back into writing too myself, when I can properly carve out the time for it. Congrats again on a job well done!

4/5/21, 2:26 AM
@A Voyeur Fan, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. Your original was hot as fuck and inspired this variation as I meditated on it while jerking off to it repeatedly. Thanks for the...um...inspiration.
Nutiper
4/4/21, 9:06 PM
> “Yeah? What about my cock?” Tyzon asked with a smug little grin and a slow bounce of the mindfucking organ in question. My eyes bounced along. Are you describing Charley's POV, or just *mine* at this point? Whew... *Phew*, another hot chapter. Loved the erotic way that Tyzon persuaded a mindfucked Charley to flat-out deepthroat his cock. And the way Tyzon came after, and how you detailed the whole process of it (and the *casualness* of a cheerfully cum-splattered Charley paired with a smug self-satisfied Tyzon), was super fun and hot. The blowjob itself felt a bit hasty, but everything before and after was *so* sexy, I can't complain. I also really love how what triggered Charley's orgasm, when giving the blowjob, was a mental image of Tyzon fingering his ass. I love how the story keeps pointing ahead to things coming on the horizon, and I notice the way Charley's ass is coming up more and more — Charley's new body definitely has desires it wants explored (thanks to Tyzon's "influence"), even if Charley himself won't admit it! I'm looking forward to reading every word, ha. I'm excited for the next chapter — as always! Will Charley get different clothes? Will he be joining Tyzon for clean-up? Will he end up exploring his new body alone in a hygiene pod? What new desires or sensations will he encounter...? The suspense! This is such a fun, hot story, and I'm glad you're writing it!

4/5/21, 1:08 AM
@Nutiper That's a fair assessment on the bj part of the scene. It was initially a little longer, but I decided to steal some stuff for future chapters. Maybe I should add those bits back in and force future-me to be creative.

Nutiper
4/5/21, 2:25 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha! That makes sense when you say that, it did seem uncharacteristically abridged. I'd say... go with what makes the process feel best for you, and makes you most satisfied! It's a very hot chapter either way, so it's kind of a win-win situation.
4/5/21, 12:34 AM
Great beginning! I look forward to where you take the story next.
4/4/21, 9:58 PM
Very well-done sex scenes! Not like a lot of stories (which shall be nameless) where everything is just summarized in an awkward sentence or two. The story as a whole is excellent - good writing, good structure, good porn. I do agree that the previews give away too much.
4/4/21, 8:49 PM
I know the chances are small, but I am still hoping that this series will one day be continued. I am dying to know what other plans Logan had for the class and the teacher.
4/4/21, 6:22 AM
Great effort. Love your descriptions of Transformation. Please write more like this.

LthrBikerThug
4/4/21, 8:21 PM
@Titan Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!