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Apr 1, 2021
4/4/21, 8:22 PM
Wow, this was great! Sorry I didn't discover this until now. It's really amazing to have inspired a story like this, to get to reread the original piece I dreamed up as it would be written by a talented author like you. And the additions you made were really hot as well! Consider this my permission to you to write a remake of any of my other stories as well, if you're interested. Hoping to get back into writing too myself, when I can properly carve out the time for it. Congrats again on a job well done!

4/5/21, 2:26 AM
@A Voyeur Fan, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. Your original was hot as fuck and inspired this variation as I meditated on it while jerking off to it repeatedly. Thanks for the...um...inspiration.
Nutiper
4/4/21, 9:06 PM
> “Yeah? What about my cock?” Tyzon asked with a smug little grin and a slow bounce of the mindfucking organ in question. My eyes bounced along. Are you describing Charley's POV, or just *mine* at this point? Whew... *Phew*, another hot chapter. Loved the erotic way that Tyzon persuaded a mindfucked Charley to flat-out deepthroat his cock. And the way Tyzon came after, and how you detailed the whole process of it (and the *casualness* of a cheerfully cum-splattered Charley paired with a smug self-satisfied Tyzon), was super fun and hot. The blowjob itself felt a bit hasty, but everything before and after was *so* sexy, I can't complain. I also really love how what triggered Charley's orgasm, when giving the blowjob, was a mental image of Tyzon fingering his ass. I love how the story keeps pointing ahead to things coming on the horizon, and I notice the way Charley's ass is coming up more and more — Charley's new body definitely has desires it wants explored (thanks to Tyzon's "influence"), even if Charley himself won't admit it! I'm looking forward to reading every word, ha. I'm excited for the next chapter — as always! Will Charley get different clothes? Will he be joining Tyzon for clean-up? Will he end up exploring his new body alone in a hygiene pod? What new desires or sensations will he encounter...? The suspense! This is such a fun, hot story, and I'm glad you're writing it!

4/5/21, 1:08 AM
@Nutiper That's a fair assessment on the bj part of the scene. It was initially a little longer, but I decided to steal some stuff for future chapters. Maybe I should add those bits back in and force future-me to be creative.

Nutiper
4/5/21, 2:25 AM
@bluesuedewho Haha! That makes sense when you say that, it did seem uncharacteristically abridged. I'd say... go with what makes the process feel best for you, and makes you most satisfied! It's a very hot chapter either way, so it's kind of a win-win situation.
4/5/21, 12:34 AM
Great beginning! I look forward to where you take the story next.
4/4/21, 9:58 PM
Very well-done sex scenes! Not like a lot of stories (which shall be nameless) where everything is just summarized in an awkward sentence or two. The story as a whole is excellent - good writing, good structure, good porn. I do agree that the previews give away too much.
4/4/21, 8:49 PM
I know the chances are small, but I am still hoping that this series will one day be continued. I am dying to know what other plans Logan had for the class and the teacher.
4/4/21, 6:22 AM
Great effort. Love your descriptions of Transformation. Please write more like this.

LthrBikerThug
4/4/21, 8:21 PM
@Titan Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
4/4/21, 7:28 PM
That's a couch I'd like to have ;)
Jockmorphr
1/1/21, 10:48 PM
@Derek This was a really hot, fun read. I loved the transformations and the way the guys got caught up in the changes. It would definitely be great if Ben and the boys got their hands on more of that gum!

4/4/21, 5:29 PM
@Jockmorphr I'm not sure that I'd give them more, but maybe one day another lucky guy will be gifted some!

Jockmorphr
4/4/21, 7:17 PM
@Derek Williams it is exciting to think about more guys getting to experience the gum!
Nice
4/4/21, 5:36 PM
Nice story! Maybe you could give Junior a boyfriend in a sequel? Like another teacher catches on and all of a sudden there's another member of the team? Or maybe it's someone investigating the art teacher's disappearance (cop, family member, friend, etc.)? All depends on how crazy you wanna get with it of course!
4/4/21, 11:56 AM
I really love this one! It's a story I've come back to several times now.

4/4/21, 5:30 PM
@Razz TFs Thanks! That's the highest compliment I can think of :)