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Willie Cici
2/9/25, 6:23 PM
Heads up -- the first couple of chapters are slow burners.
Jack
2/9/25, 4:45 PM
I cannot tell you how fucking excited I was when I saw you had uploaded another chapter. I love this story. It's so hot and it's so well written. For a couple of months I was debating writing a chapter from Carter's perspective and sending it to you to see if it would work, but I'm glad I didn't. This chapter was absolutely worth the wait!

2/9/25, 4:58 PM
@[Jack](/user/show/915335) I am so fucking glad this landed right for you! I am toying with the idea of writing a chapter from a thrall's perspective - just gotta be ready to sit in the mind of an A-grade asshole at first to make the transition really hit properly. Maybe some of Decker's teammates will get a lifestyle rewrite ...
Anonymous
2/9/25, 4:17 PM
Incredibly hot chapter and so well written! I’m so glad this series is continuing and can’t wait for the next chapter.
2/9/25, 1:37 PM
I would pay real money for what Micah's getting! Can't wait for more! 🥵
2/9/25, 1:18 PM
Super hot. Can't wait to see him get fat and dumb!
Anonymous
2/9/25, 11:06 AM
Damn man! This was amazing! Ngl, I like the idea of the tables being turned on John
2/9/25, 7:14 AM
Really great story, I love all those fantasy and changing to the men. Expceting how John will be involved since he also have the ring on himself.
essay
1/31/25, 6:10 AM
Man, where to even start with this? You've got a gift for steadily ramping up the action, while still leaving plenty of room to grow. I mean, pretty much every story should strive for that kind of progression, but not a lot actually nail it! So many of them either "blow their load" on the first conversion, or fill out their length with a plot that just kind of sits alongside the kink instead of actively contributing to it. Let's just take a look at this chapter to see what I'm talking about. Pretty much everything, from the intro with the Drone Commander, to Tyson assuming control of the drones in the van, to the players gradually succumbing to the hypnotic effects of the new equipment...it's all as deeply-infused with erotic energy as the gear is with nanodrones. By the time the rubberized players got onto the field and started syncing up like a hive-mind as they dominated the skins, I'd already gotten off. But then, you end the chapter with only Logan converted! I think that might be the first time I've ever felt blue-balled right after finishing! See what I mean? Despite being a sizable 5k words, all of it oozing with fetish fuel, this chapter feels like it's just an appetizer for what's to come! Seriously, though -- I *need* to see the rest of the team get into a big conversion orgy next chapter. And if anyone resists...well, the attendant drones are still right there, just waiting for 232 to take control of them. Mike definitely seems like he's going to need special treatment, though. I wonder what would be more appropriate: turning him into the thing he despises, or "sparing" him so that he's the only weakling left, surrounded by perfect male specimens? :smiling_imp: I'm also curious about that initial scene with the Drone Commander...was the idea that the gear is going to be mass-produced, i.e. distributed all across the country? That could be another interesting thread to pull on.

essay
1/31/25, 9:24 AM
@[essay](/user/show/10046121) So I wasn't going to add this part, but fuck it: Would you be interested in a beta reader? Don't get me wrong, the ideas and overall structure of your work are amazing, up there with the best. But I think that extra bit of polish that a second set of eyes brings to the table could elevate this story to legendary status. And I'm totally not suggesting this because I literally cannot wait for the next chapter. Nope. I'm being completely altruistic here. :wink: Jokes aside, I've been browsing the site for years, and every year I tell myself, "THIS year I'm actually going to write something." But of course there's always some excuse, like I don't think it'll be good enough, or original enough, or I don't have enough free time to really sit down and crank something out. Luckily, it turns out I don't have to write anything, because apparently there's someone out there who shares my exact taste! Seriously, I once had an idea for a story that went almost exactly like the "rubbers vs skins" scrimmage in this chapter. When I got to that part, I wondered for a minute whether I was secretly connected to a hive mind without my knowledge. Anyway, I know this is all totally crazy -- I mean, I'm not even sure if you read these comments at all, let alone whether you'd be remotely interested in my offer. But I am sure that if you do, and you are, then I'd never forgive myself if I didn't at least take a chance. Shoot me a DM on the forum if I made the right choice. Otherwise, I'll just delete this post in a couple days.

2/9/25, 5:11 AM
@[essay](/user/show/10046121) I do read all the comments! I love the fact people are enjoying my writing. I had no idea anyone would like any of it when I started, but I'm happy to see my own fantasies are shared by others. I'll message you
2/9/25, 4:23 AM
Super hot series!
2/9/25, 3:08 AM
Hot, good build up, and while the mechanics (mind and body control) aren't inherently original, their implementation makes this new and enjoyable. Cannot wait for the next entry!