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4/4/21, 1:06 AM
I don't mind the time it took you, thanks for finishing it, and I like the happy ending <3 About ideas to suggest... in the same universe. Well, I can suggest traits a story can contain... like straight to gay, role reversal (such as underling controlling the boss, son over dad, student over coach/principal, etc), feet, and mostly, big sub + small top (young nerdy vs old strong figure)... this are all my personal tastes so feel free to ignore them :) Concretes ideas... dunno, -A burglar brakes in the house of someone and ends up enslaved. -The son of this (I assume is) Aaron dude at the end spies on his dad and knows about it so he decides to use it to his advantage -A jock and his friends (one of them is the son of someone working on this company) tries to play a prank on some nerdy guy, lure him with the false excuse to study or help him with something or perhaps humiliate him... in any case, they are all ready in the house ready to pull it, he and his friends try it out using his dad pc and end up enslaved just in time for the nerd guy arriving at his house and... you know the rest. -A coworker finds about Aaron thing, maybe not a coworker but a guy for the cleaning service, and do something so he can enslave him instead. Karma~
4/3/21, 10:45 PM
Would love this verse to grow!!! Maybe other environments? At work/office? Maybe also with a guy and his sons, but the dad being the one sissified, and one of the younger sons aged? So many possibilities, such great material ;)
Anonymous
4/3/21, 10:31 PM
interesting development! I wonder how this changes the David's personality now that he seems to no longer have his powers?
4/3/21, 8:01 PM
oh super hot ending!!! this was very fun to read!
Leo
4/3/21, 6:28 PM
Yay!! I’m so happy my favorite author is back! ❤️ I really missed your work, and this chapter did not disappoint 👌 I wonder what’s gonna happen to Jake’s daddy-slave harem now that he’s losing his powers? Will they turn against him? Or maybe call the cops on him? How will he get them back to being obedient and mindless? So many interesting topics. Can’t wait to see more from you! Please don’t make us wait so long for the next chapter 🙏 lol
Anonymous
4/3/21, 6:22 PM
You gotta keep writing.
4/3/21, 6:16 PM
That was hot. I wished he hadn't been fired from his job though.
4/3/21, 2:15 PM
Another Great Chapter. The power loss is an interesting twist. is gonna be interesting to see how he ties up loose ends before he looses it all together.
Anonymous
4/3/21, 12:12 PM
i can't wait to see this continue.
4/3/21, 10:46 AM
In Chapter One, Pizza Boy fucked the Horny Stud and filled his ass full of cum, so it wouldn't be a virgin ass to fuck that had never felt the rush of being flooded with cum in Chapter Two. Otherwise, I'm loving this series so far. Nice twist at the end!