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2/9/25, 4:23 AM
Super hot series!
2/9/25, 3:08 AM
Hot, good build up, and while the mechanics (mind and body control) aren't inherently original, their implementation makes this new and enjoyable. Cannot wait for the next entry!
2/5/25, 7:16 PM
Honestly i am not sure what i would want to happen in upcoming chapters. The household Dom is so smooth at coercing other guys to submit, obey and serve, and his approach is so hidden with his use of drugs that it certainly seems pretty non-consensual. With the first two Parker brothers their horizons were happily expanded all along the way. i am doubting from the discussion that John will thank anyone for expanding his horizons or anything else. i can only hope that if a Dom goes down that in the end he feels a strong need to manhandle and hard fuck a very submissive bottom boy, and that my character is the one he chooses to dominate and use. ;) In either case i will lament one less totally dominant man in the world (even if he is/was 100% hetero). :(

2/5/25, 7:18 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) When you’re done with this story you should read the rise and fall of Johnny football which tells John’s story from his pov

2/9/25, 1:48 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) i really loved the way you weaved the physical sex into the psychological power plays. i am not a reader who just wants to get in and get off. i enjoy the character development, relationships, plot, and other context that for me makes the sex so much hotter. i suppose for that very reason i am too much invested at this point in all these characters and where they are going from here, particularly Sammy and our unnamed seriously demoted household Alpha. (BTW i would love to have a name for him!!) So thanks for the suggestion to go back, but i can't right now. i will come back when i am right up to date with the timeline I'm currently following.
2/8/25, 11:57 PM
Buckle your seatbelt, this is gonna be quite a ride …

2/9/25, 1:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Hopefully it'll be a thrilling ride for you all!
2/8/25, 11:30 PM
Wow, I love where this one is heading. I was unsure for a bit how the story tied into the story challenge, but the ending made it clear. The suggestion made to Chris is great; that mod is like a gay man's ultimate dream. I hope things continue to heat up in future chapters.

2/9/25, 1:38 AM
@[CollegeBoys69](/user/show/10059398) Thanks for the praise! Yeah, I guess the "waking up like this" doesn't take place til chapter 2... so stay tuned!
Anonymous
2/9/25, 1:19 AM
I love all the different characters! So many sexy possibilities for how this can go. I'd love to see Anthony's nipple sensitivity more on display. I really hope this continues!
2/9/25, 12:36 AM
Wow, a great chapter! Yousef is getting closer to our resident hocky bear. The primacy of the wolf over the man due to the full moon is presumably why he did not recognize his own father as one of the mondjugen. But I'm sure there will be some very awkward conversations come dawn... I wonder how wolves view the incestuous couplings that doubtless happened. Tom has gone AWOL... I wonder how the tragedy of not being able to reconcile with his daughter is going to impact his relationship with Larry. I want another perspective from inside Pete's mind... I'm curious to get a deeper work to see how different his enthrallment to Alpha Ruiz has made him. The thing about his eyes less bright is a little strange. Alphas seem to be having very high turn-over rates recently. Two assassinations... based on everybody's reactions, that seems extremely rare. What exactly is going on? And the Wolf King is going to be back soon, to collect his seer...
nycboot
2/9/25, 12:13 AM
It's taken me a while to read the previous chapter and this. Your story is really magnificent (I admit, in part because I predicted aspects of it). It's so wonderful because your characterizations are so detailed and believable (up to the superpower stuff), and of course the surprises (I keep thinking Red Hawk's necklace is going to play a role, although you've not set it up that way). I always feel with other stories that the chapters are way too short. With you I felt they were a good length, but now I find myself pausing between chapters to digest and think about the characters and events. I admit to being fearful that you might contradict all that you've led up to and have a downer of a conclusion (e.g. Colt going over to Leviathan's side), but so far you've had some great outcomes. Thanks so much for sharing your unique vision!

2/9/25, 12:18 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thank you so much...and spoiler...colt is not going over to the other side. Not happening. I promise...more bad things will probably happen, but I am a big happy end person...to an extent.
2/8/25, 11:38 PM
After reading this story to this point, i realize how deep i could be into giving myself up to coercive consensual non-consent sex to a Dominant like Sammy. i can't imagine how any form of sex could be any hotter than being worked over like this until my body and my mind are putty in the hands of a Master. This seems kind of like experiencing Stockholm syndrome at the hands of friends with special benefits.
2/8/25, 10:41 PM
Masterful. GREAT story!!!