Recent Comments

4/4/21, 11:46 AM
Just found this series. It's great! Please write more of it.
4/4/21, 10:57 AM
So fun! Can't wait to see what sort of fun he can have with Zeth!
Jeffery
4/4/21, 10:54 AM
Such a good story so far. Really look forward to reading chapter 3 Do you have any suggestions to stories that are similar to yours?? Or any suggested authors?
4/4/21, 10:25 AM
I was not expecting this, but I love it! He even uses his own hypnosis skills for my favorite thing: making the target feel relaxed and safe. Excellent series, dude!
4/4/21, 8:31 AM
Oh,I need MORE,please
4/4/21, 7:26 AM
This is good! More usage of the dad please!
4/4/21, 6:50 AM
one of my favourites to date.
4/4/21, 3:16 AM
theres something really awesome about short, simple stories like this. this is incredible, and i hope you continue to write more fiction here. have a great day

LthrBikerThug
4/4/21, 6:11 AM
@AClosetBear Thanks for the compliment! It really improves my mood seeing good feedback on my writing.
4/4/21, 4:15 AM
Your fetishes and desires come through clearly. I think I would have liked it more if it were more personal. Instead of saying "YOU", I would have been more interested in a first hand experience of "I found myself" or "I was aroused and delighted when my moan of pleasure came out as a bleating"... I guess in my case, I would have been envious and trying to imagine meself in your position. At least for me. I liked it a lot and hope you continue to experiment and share!!

LthrBikerThug
4/4/21, 6:10 AM
@Stroppy Author Noted. I do see that working better because of the theme of the story. I tend to do better at First Person and Third Person stories myself.
Kent
4/4/21, 5:56 AM
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