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4/2/21, 2:51 AM
a very very hot story so happy to have found it. pony play is not a common theme and you do it so nice wish there was more to the story.
Apr 1, 2021
Anonymous
4/1/21, 7:40 AM
Very hot story and well written too

4/1/21, 10:12 AM
@ I'm gratified that you enjoyed it. For some reason, the "writing" rating on my stories tends to be the lowest rating on them (authors can actually see the aggregate scores for the categories of their story ratings). I'm not sure why that is, but it's nice to know that someone appreciates my writing. :)

Evan
4/2/21, 2:14 AM
I thought the writing was fantastic @controlme. I loved this story from start to finish. Great pacing, great payoff. I loved the subtle manipulation and oblivious obedience and submission. Very hot. Thanks for writing.
4/2/21, 12:11 AM
Very solid foundation for a very erotic transformation. Looking forward to jerking off to future chapters.
kuro
4/1/21, 11:05 PM
Something I don't think I've mentioned appreciating (though I definitely do!) in my previous comments is that Charley was getting a more expansive vocabulary, rather than less! It's a nice subversion of the usual way things go, and refreshing in and of itself - and when you have it contrasting with his oblivious descent into incoherent lewdness, it makes the latter even better... Anyway, this chapter was flamingly hot - I'd say you're getting better and better as you're going along! Small changes: "if anything,* heavier* than" has a misplaced asterisk. *"Pet boa constrictor* throb" could also debatably have a full stop added in, to match the formatting of the other throbs.
Apr 1, 2021
4/1/21, 11:05 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this! Well done and thank you!
kuro
4/1/21, 10:57 PM
Ah, Tyzon putting the whammy on Charley - "perfectly natural" for him to be interested in big dudes is such a *chef's kiss* thought to slip in there. Really emphasies how his thoughts are gradually snaking around to a totally new point of view! Fully chiming with gaybird and Nutiper, here - this is a really nicely done story, and I'm glad it was recommended to me. This chapter particularly drives home how much he's changed in the space of the stories, which makes everything from hereon out especially impactful!
4/1/21, 9:56 PM
YES to this series!!! All my favorite kinks in one place! Thank you -- well done!
Apr 1, 2021
4/1/21, 9:51 PM
Great story! I really enjoyed it. Thought the slow burn was great -- dialogue was very natural.
4/1/21, 8:46 PM
I really love this concept. Super hot.
4/1/21, 7:02 PM
I'm going to try to make future chapters longer -- I'm writing most of these on my phone, so they feel a lot longer than they actually are when I'm typing them up. I have four decently developed ideas (all of which I'd like to get to at some point) but feedback on what people want to see first would be appreciated. Currently my ideas are: 1) Tyzon and Charley keep messing around. 2) Charley does some exploration while Tyzon is out. 3) Early morning workout with Zethro and Crage. 4) Musical jam session with Yan.

Nutiper
4/1/21, 8:01 PM
@bluesuedewho Ooh I did notice they were short, but they were damn hot, so I didn't mind. I feel like the ideas in the order you listed them could be a good plan! It'd be great to get more of Tyzon and Charley off the bat. Otherwise I guess it could feel like getting blue-balled (no pun intended, ha) since their dynamic is so hot and the story keeps edging Charley to the brink of fully "exploring" Tyzon — so, I mean, it feels like there's definitely more for them to do before we move on, and like there could be more scenes with just the two of them messing around. But after that, it would definitely be fun to see Charley exploring on his own! Kinda feeling out his situation, discovering new things about himself... And then, afterward, it would be a refreshing change of pace to have Charley do things with the other guys (the workout; the jam session). But go with what ends up making the most sense to you! If you realize a different order makes more sense in your head, I'd go with your instinct.