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Apr 1, 2021
4/1/21, 8:01 AM
I remember AVF's original story and this is an excellent take on that idea. It was super hot while also being written in a very realistic style.

4/1/21, 10:08 AM
@Varlance Much appreciated. I know you have worked with AVF in the past. I also look forward to his take on what he has inspired.
4/1/21, 9:20 AM
I don't find this story very hot, but it is so cute, and I find it really creative. Still a fave.
4/1/21, 7:41 AM
Everytime i read a story from you im left wishing the next part would arrive sooner! It was well worth the wait. On a side note, im really surprised when i saw that you were one of the top comments on a Doctor Mike video with Micheal Reeves in it lol It made me thought about you starring Micheal as one of the boys in your story lol

4/1/21, 7:57 AM
@Moose Oh wow, I hadn't noticed the Dr. Mike comment had done so well. Last time I looked, it only had a few hundred likes. I guess it helps when Dr. Mike himself liked the comment. :)
3/31/21, 1:15 AM
i completely agree with nutiper, to the point where i don't have much else to add! but MAN, i'm enjoying this story (and checking in hungrily for updates when i can). it's a perfect blend of fun and sexy, and the mind control/transformation elements are executed perfectly. i'm also a huge sucker for chronovac-style stuff, especially from the victim's perspective, and you absolutely nailed that. also you have a great balance so far of charley succumbing to the changes but still being in that no-homo pit and remaining a version of himself (albeit a gayer and sluttier one) instead of becoming essentially a different character straight away. i really hope you continue it on this site, and if you don't that you leave some kind of link to the rest. i really really wanna see where it ends up :) in terms of why there's low traffic, i do wanna warn you that if you didn't know, the site flags the tag boi (or man-to-boi) as like. underage boy? which isn't what anybody uses the tag for, but it does mean that people who don't wanna make accounts can't read the first installment. and even then, folks who don't know about the weird quirks of the system might see the flag and assume it's put there for actual underage sex and therefore not want to check it out. so that could be a reason for lower traffic? i dunno much about what's popular on here though, so i could be talking entirely out of my ass

3/31/21, 1:57 AM
Oh! Thanks for the info. That definitely wasn't how I was using the tag. I'll get rid of that. Hopefully changing tags and maybe editing the summary will get some more eyes on the story. @gaybird

Martin
3/31/21, 5:45 AM
@gaybird @bluesuedewho Just to clarify: The tags triggering the "safe mode" are listed here: [https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/safe-mode/1245](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/safe-mode/1245) Since the safe mode was added to the site, the number of people actually using accounts on GSS has skyrocket. Most people want to turn it off. So yes, if your story is tagged with one of those tags, it will see somewhat fewer hits, maybe 30% less or so, but it's not totally crashing it either. Just stay honest with the tags, please, avoiding a tag just because of the safe mode is not what I intended.

4/1/21, 4:27 AM
@Martin oh yeah i absolutely didn't mean "don't tag your content appropriately because it'll get u more clicks." personally, i want to avoid reading about underage/incest stuff, and i'd be kinda pissed if i ran into it with no warning. i just meant that in this case, the flag doesn't actually suit the material. boi seems to have been lumped in to mean underage, and everyone in this story is an adult

Martin
4/1/21, 5:20 AM
@gaybird "Teen" doesn't mean underage though. All stories with teenager characters will be tagged with that (if I don't miss it), including 19 year old people. Underage is a very subjective term that differs from country to county and even state to state. That's why I prefer "sexually mature" and you won't see any stories with people who are not "sexually mature" on this site. "Boi" and "boy" is also debatable. I could be convinced to take these off the banning list, but that should be discussed in the form please.
4/1/21, 4:31 AM
Please continue! Some coach/daddy action would be great. Maybe the new coach daddy love shaving his nips sucked by his bois?
4/1/21, 3:02 AM
Thanks for continuing this hot story. I love your writing style.
4/1/21, 2:45 AM
Such hot creamy fun! Thank you. Now I just need another hundred or so chapters and we'll be all set
Nutiper
4/1/21, 2:42 AM
> Thanks for all the thoughts and suggestions! Definitely helpful – I really appreciate the time and effort you put into explaining things. I took your advice and added a clearer series summary and lightly pruned some of the tags that either didn’t apply or just barely applied. @bluesuedewho You're most welcome! And I think the new summary and the tags look great!! Fingers crossed that it will help a bit with bringing more readers on board when you post the next chapter... I *really* like this story, ha, so I'm excited at the idea of more people reading it and discovering how hot and fun it is.
3/30/21, 2:51 PM
Any chance for weight gain and/or mpreg? Youve mentioned baby a few times so i think an actual pregnancy/birth would be so erotic. Or even raceplay/amping up the interracial aspect of it? Focusing on Trevor or the asian twins servicing Zeke's big black cock or submitting to Trevor's big white cock would be hot as hell.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:49 PM
@Fattenupmen good chance for mpreg of some kind since I'm somewhat into that myself. weight gain maybe. i admit if i tried race play it wouldn't feel authentic though

4/1/21, 2:14 AM
@Tyrol im so excited
4/1/21, 1:48 AM
I love your writing. The wrestling scene was hot, and the lake scene at the end was tender. Wonderful work!