Recent Comments

4/2/21, 4:58 AM
> great build up. erect and hoping for more chapters
4/2/21, 2:51 AM
a very very hot story so happy to have found it. pony play is not a common theme and you do it so nice wish there was more to the story.
Apr 1, 2021
Anonymous
4/1/21, 7:40 AM
Very hot story and well written too

4/1/21, 10:12 AM
@ I'm gratified that you enjoyed it. For some reason, the "writing" rating on my stories tends to be the lowest rating on them (authors can actually see the aggregate scores for the categories of their story ratings). I'm not sure why that is, but it's nice to know that someone appreciates my writing. :)

Evan
4/2/21, 2:14 AM
I thought the writing was fantastic @controlme. I loved this story from start to finish. Great pacing, great payoff. I loved the subtle manipulation and oblivious obedience and submission. Very hot. Thanks for writing.
4/2/21, 12:11 AM
Very solid foundation for a very erotic transformation. Looking forward to jerking off to future chapters.
kuro
4/1/21, 11:05 PM
Something I don't think I've mentioned appreciating (though I definitely do!) in my previous comments is that Charley was getting a more expansive vocabulary, rather than less! It's a nice subversion of the usual way things go, and refreshing in and of itself - and when you have it contrasting with his oblivious descent into incoherent lewdness, it makes the latter even better... Anyway, this chapter was flamingly hot - I'd say you're getting better and better as you're going along! Small changes: "if anything,* heavier* than" has a misplaced asterisk. *"Pet boa constrictor* throb" could also debatably have a full stop added in, to match the formatting of the other throbs.
Apr 1, 2021
4/1/21, 11:05 PM
i thoroughly enjoyed this! Well done and thank you!
kuro
4/1/21, 10:57 PM
Ah, Tyzon putting the whammy on Charley - "perfectly natural" for him to be interested in big dudes is such a *chef's kiss* thought to slip in there. Really emphasies how his thoughts are gradually snaking around to a totally new point of view! Fully chiming with gaybird and Nutiper, here - this is a really nicely done story, and I'm glad it was recommended to me. This chapter particularly drives home how much he's changed in the space of the stories, which makes everything from hereon out especially impactful!
4/1/21, 9:56 PM
YES to this series!!! All my favorite kinks in one place! Thank you -- well done!
Apr 1, 2021
4/1/21, 9:51 PM
Great story! I really enjoyed it. Thought the slow burn was great -- dialogue was very natural.
4/1/21, 8:46 PM
I really love this concept. Super hot.