Recent Comments

4/1/21, 3:55 PM
As per usual, really great job. You are really developing each of the characters very well and love the different perspectives in their own voices. Can't wait to read what happens to Eli
Henlo2
4/1/21, 3:52 PM
This series is unique and hot!! Keep it up!
4/1/21, 3:42 PM
would like to know more....what happens next?
Apr 1, 2021
boi98229
4/1/21, 7:41 AM
I love this story!! -- one of the most erotic stories I've read!! i really wish i could meet both Marcus and John, or better yet Controlme and his Master, or perhaps a lot more realistically i really want to go read more of ControlMe's stories! Thanks for a great story!

4/1/21, 10:09 AM
@boi98229 Unfortunately, I don't have a 'master.' Just a persistent erotic fantasy of what it would feel like to have such a person dominating my life.
Apr 1, 2021
4/1/21, 8:01 AM
I remember AVF's original story and this is an excellent take on that idea. It was super hot while also being written in a very realistic style.

4/1/21, 10:08 AM
@Varlance Much appreciated. I know you have worked with AVF in the past. I also look forward to his take on what he has inspired.
4/1/21, 9:20 AM
I don't find this story very hot, but it is so cute, and I find it really creative. Still a fave.
4/1/21, 7:41 AM
Everytime i read a story from you im left wishing the next part would arrive sooner! It was well worth the wait. On a side note, im really surprised when i saw that you were one of the top comments on a Doctor Mike video with Micheal Reeves in it lol It made me thought about you starring Micheal as one of the boys in your story lol

4/1/21, 7:57 AM
@Moose Oh wow, I hadn't noticed the Dr. Mike comment had done so well. Last time I looked, it only had a few hundred likes. I guess it helps when Dr. Mike himself liked the comment. :)
3/31/21, 1:15 AM
i completely agree with nutiper, to the point where i don't have much else to add! but MAN, i'm enjoying this story (and checking in hungrily for updates when i can). it's a perfect blend of fun and sexy, and the mind control/transformation elements are executed perfectly. i'm also a huge sucker for chronovac-style stuff, especially from the victim's perspective, and you absolutely nailed that. also you have a great balance so far of charley succumbing to the changes but still being in that no-homo pit and remaining a version of himself (albeit a gayer and sluttier one) instead of becoming essentially a different character straight away. i really hope you continue it on this site, and if you don't that you leave some kind of link to the rest. i really really wanna see where it ends up :) in terms of why there's low traffic, i do wanna warn you that if you didn't know, the site flags the tag boi (or man-to-boi) as like. underage boy? which isn't what anybody uses the tag for, but it does mean that people who don't wanna make accounts can't read the first installment. and even then, folks who don't know about the weird quirks of the system might see the flag and assume it's put there for actual underage sex and therefore not want to check it out. so that could be a reason for lower traffic? i dunno much about what's popular on here though, so i could be talking entirely out of my ass

3/31/21, 1:57 AM
Oh! Thanks for the info. That definitely wasn't how I was using the tag. I'll get rid of that. Hopefully changing tags and maybe editing the summary will get some more eyes on the story. @gaybird

Martin
3/31/21, 5:45 AM
@gaybird @bluesuedewho Just to clarify: The tags triggering the "safe mode" are listed here: [https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/safe-mode/1245](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/safe-mode/1245) Since the safe mode was added to the site, the number of people actually using accounts on GSS has skyrocket. Most people want to turn it off. So yes, if your story is tagged with one of those tags, it will see somewhat fewer hits, maybe 30% less or so, but it's not totally crashing it either. Just stay honest with the tags, please, avoiding a tag just because of the safe mode is not what I intended.

4/1/21, 4:27 AM
@Martin oh yeah i absolutely didn't mean "don't tag your content appropriately because it'll get u more clicks." personally, i want to avoid reading about underage/incest stuff, and i'd be kinda pissed if i ran into it with no warning. i just meant that in this case, the flag doesn't actually suit the material. boi seems to have been lumped in to mean underage, and everyone in this story is an adult

Martin
4/1/21, 5:20 AM
@gaybird "Teen" doesn't mean underage though. All stories with teenager characters will be tagged with that (if I don't miss it), including 19 year old people. Underage is a very subjective term that differs from country to county and even state to state. That's why I prefer "sexually mature" and you won't see any stories with people who are not "sexually mature" on this site. "Boi" and "boy" is also debatable. I could be convinced to take these off the banning list, but that should be discussed in the form please.
4/1/21, 4:31 AM
Please continue! Some coach/daddy action would be great. Maybe the new coach daddy love shaving his nips sucked by his bois?
4/1/21, 3:02 AM
Thanks for continuing this hot story. I love your writing style.