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LondonBoi
3/31/21, 8:54 AM
So hot, sounding action with goo corrupting the balls is always my favorite part. I'm happy to hear that you'll be doing more!
3/31/21, 8:48 AM
SO HOTTT!! i love alex's smirky attitude! and cumming in command .... damn
3/31/21, 7:15 AM
What a great story! i love reading about how a guy's kinks are found out and exploited to the furthest extent to where it reinvents their lives and they should be horrified, but they're too hard to stop it. Bravo my good friend! excellent as usual! my compliments to the commissioner.
3/31/21, 7:02 AM
A really great story. looking forward to see whats coming next!
3/31/21, 6:14 AM
Wonderfully done. Added story as a favorite. Great pacing as both men learned their "place" in the different ways. Jake's interaction with Adam was very hot and perfectly defined Jake's role (maybe my favorite section of the story). One criticism (and believe me I LOVED the story, so this is very minor), didn't get the purpose of the dialog between J and K, it didn't reveal anything about the characters or the plot that you hadn't already established. Great take on an underrepresented kink! Would it be too forward to ask for more?
3/31/21, 6:05 AM
Great History men
3/31/21, 5:54 AM
really enjoy this story, cannt wait to see more
3/31/21, 4:00 AM
Nice, I do love the time stop tag, thee is not much of it here, so its much appreciated. I hope I can see more in the future :3
Martin
3/21/21, 1:49 PM
Lovely break of the 4th wall! So rare and this one is really good!

3/31/21, 4:00 AM
@Martin Glad you enjoyed this (and thanks for the ability to hide my name and reply). I originally came up with this idea three years ago as a response to certain stories and tropes they use. This contest was just the motivation i needed and i wrote it in about three days right before the deadline, so thanks for that as well. It was originally going to focus more on Spider-Man himself, but Deadpool has a way of taking over. When he did it was natural to have 4th wall breaks, and I'm happy they worked for you. Honestly they (and the font styling) were the things i was most worried about, so hearing you compliment that puts my heart at ease.
3/31/21, 3:51 AM
This is too hot.