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3/31/21, 1:10 AM
I definitely hope one of them becomes the Alpha that they all want to be serviced by! Even for a week would be awesome. Coming back from those feelings would be harder to deal with. Now if only the Alpha becomes a massively muscled huge cocked guy and they all grow bubble butts!
3/31/21, 1:06 AM
Thanks for the response. It really is well written and I'll hang on to see what happens in part 3.
3/31/21, 12:40 AM
this is an exceptional story! it might be interesting to have a card that grows cocks instead of shrinks them, to see how far some of the boys would debase themselves to become more "masculine"
Panini21
3/30/21, 11:56 PM
we need more
3/30/21, 12:22 AM
I was really into the story until Matt snapped a pic of his son. I didn't like that he was beginning to set up his sons for sex. He may be a homophobe but we don't know anything abut his sons. I guess it's just a step too far for me. Great story otherwise.

3/30/21, 11:03 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks for the feedback! As far as Matt's homophobia and setting his sons up for sex, this wasn't meant to be any kind of a payback story. Vicente's more about conquest...he sees what he wants and figures out how to get it, and he wants the entire family. The homophobia is mostly there to accentuate just how much Matt wouldn't do anything like this under normal circumstances. (Spoiler: if you're curious about the sons, though, Sean is *very* homophobic while Ethan is much more the docile mama's boy where, if there's any homophobia at all, it's inadvertent.)
Evan
3/30/21, 10:33 PM
A surprising amount of character growth in this chapter! Still really loving this concept. Nice going!
3/30/21, 10:32 PM
Hot story. It does a great job of setting up characters, story ideas, and even hints at the possible danger with the 'lifers'. I look forward to seeing how our hero changes as he spends time at the facility.
Feb 8, 2021
3/30/21, 10:08 PM
I love this.
Mar 30, 2021
3/30/21, 10:02 PM
Intense and nicely written!
3/30/21, 9:22 PM
My only complaint i came before i could finish reading it the first time.