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3/29/21, 11:42 AM
I also note the racial diversity of the characters is made very prominent here. Also, I had to re-read rule Nine multiple times to understand it. It wasn't immediately clear to me what 'combined' meant and the rule also only works properly if the brothers fuck the House Bitch on Sundays as required in rule Six. Looks to me like the best strategy is to have anal sex on Sunday afternoons and then oral sex the following Sunday morning, which results in normal dicks all week and tiny dicks only on Sunday morning, allowing plenty of time to straight-party all week without further penalty. Hot premise and looking forward to seeing how it plays out!

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:19 PM
@Varlance you would be correct and this is exactly the conversation they have in the next chapter so congrats! and yeah if i cared more i could have spent time making the rules easier to understand but i just wanted to push out quantity first or it wouldn't have ever gotten published. hope it was good enough!
Hypnofeet
3/28/21, 5:14 PM
I'm confused..I thought this was getting posted "alongside chapter 2"? :)

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:14 PM
@Hypnofeet it's up now. the site wouldn't let me add a chapter to a series that hadn't been approved yet
3/29/21, 1:47 PM
Trevor/Travis was a bit confusing , but otherwise this was so phenomenal. It's unique, hot, and incredibly well written. Like. . . It's so well written I found myself being drawn into the story more than wanking Hahaha. The characters are all unique and developed. The rules are complex, but in a good way that's understandable. It creates a lot of guessing as to what might happen. It's just really great! I cannot wait to read more. Five stars across the board.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:07 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk thanks so much for the high praise! i
Mindwhisperer
3/29/21, 9:04 PM
As *porn* goes much of this was absurd, useless babble, but if the story is to be judged on originality and the author's ability to weave a complicated plot . . . bravo! The problem for me was that one almost needs to keep a journal just to keep track of who's, who and what's happening on which day. Still, once the author finally got beyond thinking he had to create a work fitting for Cecil B DeMille to climb out of his grave to produce for the really . . . really big screen and began to actually write *porn,* it wasn't all that bad.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:07 PM
@Mindwhisperer it's weird you say that because this is my first attempt at putting in more rules and backstory, while i generally prefer to minimize that stuff and focus on the sexy stuff. i really didn't try to make the story a big deal because in the end i just wanted to humiliate some jocks with a gay curse while keeping them "straight". if you're into more in-your-face porn that doesn't mess around I'd like to recommend my other series!
3/29/21, 9:28 PM
Zeke is great, I wouldn't mind him being a nice alpha and taking care of all of his brothers after they helped him out

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:03 PM
@Loserat I'm so glad Zeke is popular! he's not going to be a benevolent character for some time to come
3/29/21, 11:56 PM
Since you solicited suggestions, I agree with the anonymous poster that diapers could be a fun humiliation to incorporate. If that's too niche though any level of watersports is a good addition . Good premise for the story! Looking forward to the coming entries

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:02 PM
@Showsomerestraints diapers and watersports aren't my thing but i might humiliate them with some mental
3/29/21, 11:59 PM
Not sure I ever want them to break the curse. A very interesting story. The guys act like real jocks in the situation. The doubt, resistance, and ultimate acceptance of each act is well written.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:01 PM
@Cutlerfan that's such high praise! thanks! i am not very in with jock culture so i tried my best. and no, they will never break the curse don't worry.
Jockmorphr
3/30/21, 12:57 AM
I really like the context of this story, and the fratboys themselves are shaping up to be really fun and interesting characters. I will admit to finding the action a little confusing given the number of charactes, the multiple rules, and the timing element. That said, I like the pressure the guys are under to comply and I am really enjoying the mental and physical changes that you've woven in. I hope that the guys will be presented with other humbling and humiliating mental and physical changes as we move through the story. Seeing these hunky, well built and well hung jocks lose some of the attributes they hold so dear would be delicious. In particular, it would be very hot if the cock shrinking became cumulative (rather than resetting) resulting in some of the guys getting really small cocks out of the curse.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:59 PM
@Jockmorphr thanks for the feedback! so far I'm planning on nothing being permanent because i want them to feel like they're fighting against the humiliation the whole time, as in it's fun to humiliate them anew every week. if they had tiny dicks at the beginning of the week, well there's nothing to take away from there! i will keep my eye out for things that i would eventually like to make permanent but no plans for that now
3/30/21, 3:03 AM
Loving this story - any chance we can witness a double penetration of Trevor? That would be insanely hot. And some public humiliation of Greg.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:55 PM
@Haven both of those are definitely good ideas that I'll keep in mind!
3/30/21, 7:04 AM
The rules are a bit hard to keep track off if I'm going to be honest, however this was one fucking hot chapter! I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeves :) wouldn't have minded them chosing the Alpha option...

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:54 PM
@Transformheaven thanks for the feedback! yeah i know it's hard to keep track of. i knew that going into it, but i don't edit at all. my philosophy is to just write sexy stuff because that's what we're all here for and if i stressed out about the writing quality too much i would just never publish anything or it would become un-fun.