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3/30/21, 9:37 AM
Absolutely amazing. I'm a tad jealous of Danni, and would love to have a barber like Carlos!

Anonymous
3/30/21, 6:24 PM
@ i do believe though that a huge pompadour can look fabulous on a femboi, especially with highlights and super short sides
Anonymous
3/30/21, 4:53 PM
It is a frat house. So underwear, diapers, blowjobs, watersports, public and private, under cloths, etc, is a normal part of hazing.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 5:13 PM
not to be fair to frats because they really don't deserve it but not all of them are the same. also hazing is done specifically with the intent of psychological warfare, because the people involved don't want to do it, and is usually only applied to new members. so bottom line, just because it's a common theme doesn't mean it's something any frat brother would be
3/28/21, 8:31 PM
This is an interesting premise, and I"m excited as to where you're going with it. Though I have to confess, I find the idea of frat boys being magically cursed into having lots of gay sex to be LESS improbable than the mere existence of an American fraternity as racially diverse as this one. :)

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:17 PM
@Evelded i know right? i simply refuse to write a porn with only white people in it though (when there are this many unrelated characters). it goes against my ethos.

3/30/21, 4:41 PM
@Tyrol Understood, although in my own writing, I have the opposite issue. As a white guy from the South, I'm uncomfortable writing porn focusing on other ethnicities for fear of sexualizing minorities. Especially so at a site like GSS where the focus is on mind control and is therefore inherently nonconsensual. Basically, I recoil at the idea of "enslaving" a POC even in a work of fiction. In the first draft of "Grand Theft Penis," the Mr. Wynne character was going to be a black guy explicitly using voodoo magic and then I decided that would be racist as hell. As much as possible, I try to simply avoid discussing the ethnicities of my characters so the reader can imagine whoever they want, but when it's something like "a fraternity of rich assholes," I suppose it's hard not to view them all as white dudes unless the text says differently. Not that it prevents me from enjoying your excellent story, of course. I look forward to seeing what the next week brings.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 5:09 PM
@Evelded https://youtu.be/RbhcRKsRwFM ever seen this? (freckle video) haha! in all seriousness though i don't like to give the reader the chance to imagine that all the characters are white because that's the default and i would prefer people tried to sexualize every race equally. and don't worry about the enslavement thing. everyone in this story gets their turn.
3/30/21, 4:35 PM
I love this series, can't wait to see chapter 4.
3/29/21, 11:42 AM
I also note the racial diversity of the characters is made very prominent here. Also, I had to re-read rule Nine multiple times to understand it. It wasn't immediately clear to me what 'combined' meant and the rule also only works properly if the brothers fuck the House Bitch on Sundays as required in rule Six. Looks to me like the best strategy is to have anal sex on Sunday afternoons and then oral sex the following Sunday morning, which results in normal dicks all week and tiny dicks only on Sunday morning, allowing plenty of time to straight-party all week without further penalty. Hot premise and looking forward to seeing how it plays out!

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:19 PM
@Varlance you would be correct and this is exactly the conversation they have in the next chapter so congrats! and yeah if i cared more i could have spent time making the rules easier to understand but i just wanted to push out quantity first or it wouldn't have ever gotten published. hope it was good enough!
Hypnofeet
3/28/21, 5:14 PM
I'm confused..I thought this was getting posted "alongside chapter 2"? :)

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:14 PM
@Hypnofeet it's up now. the site wouldn't let me add a chapter to a series that hadn't been approved yet
3/29/21, 1:47 PM
Trevor/Travis was a bit confusing , but otherwise this was so phenomenal. It's unique, hot, and incredibly well written. Like. . . It's so well written I found myself being drawn into the story more than wanking Hahaha. The characters are all unique and developed. The rules are complex, but in a good way that's understandable. It creates a lot of guessing as to what might happen. It's just really great! I cannot wait to read more. Five stars across the board.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:07 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk thanks so much for the high praise! i
Mindwhisperer
3/29/21, 9:04 PM
As *porn* goes much of this was absurd, useless babble, but if the story is to be judged on originality and the author's ability to weave a complicated plot . . . bravo! The problem for me was that one almost needs to keep a journal just to keep track of who's, who and what's happening on which day. Still, once the author finally got beyond thinking he had to create a work fitting for Cecil B DeMille to climb out of his grave to produce for the really . . . really big screen and began to actually write *porn,* it wasn't all that bad.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:07 PM
@Mindwhisperer it's weird you say that because this is my first attempt at putting in more rules and backstory, while i generally prefer to minimize that stuff and focus on the sexy stuff. i really didn't try to make the story a big deal because in the end i just wanted to humiliate some jocks with a gay curse while keeping them "straight". if you're into more in-your-face porn that doesn't mess around I'd like to recommend my other series!
3/29/21, 9:28 PM
Zeke is great, I wouldn't mind him being a nice alpha and taking care of all of his brothers after they helped him out

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:03 PM
@Loserat I'm so glad Zeke is popular! he's not going to be a benevolent character for some time to come
3/29/21, 11:56 PM
Since you solicited suggestions, I agree with the anonymous poster that diapers could be a fun humiliation to incorporate. If that's too niche though any level of watersports is a good addition . Good premise for the story! Looking forward to the coming entries

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:02 PM
@Showsomerestraints diapers and watersports aren't my thing but i might humiliate them with some mental