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Jockmorphr
3/30/21, 12:57 AM
I really like the context of this story, and the fratboys themselves are shaping up to be really fun and interesting characters. I will admit to finding the action a little confusing given the number of charactes, the multiple rules, and the timing element. That said, I like the pressure the guys are under to comply and I am really enjoying the mental and physical changes that you've woven in. I hope that the guys will be presented with other humbling and humiliating mental and physical changes as we move through the story. Seeing these hunky, well built and well hung jocks lose some of the attributes they hold so dear would be delicious. In particular, it would be very hot if the cock shrinking became cumulative (rather than resetting) resulting in some of the guys getting really small cocks out of the curse.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:59 PM
@Jockmorphr thanks for the feedback! so far I'm planning on nothing being permanent because i want them to feel like they're fighting against the humiliation the whole time, as in it's fun to humiliate them anew every week. if they had tiny dicks at the beginning of the week, well there's nothing to take away from there! i will keep my eye out for things that i would eventually like to make permanent but no plans for that now
3/30/21, 3:03 AM
Loving this story - any chance we can witness a double penetration of Trevor? That would be insanely hot. And some public humiliation of Greg.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:55 PM
@Haven both of those are definitely good ideas that I'll keep in mind!
3/30/21, 7:04 AM
The rules are a bit hard to keep track off if I'm going to be honest, however this was one fucking hot chapter! I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeves :) wouldn't have minded them chosing the Alpha option...

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:54 PM
@Transformheaven thanks for the feedback! yeah i know it's hard to keep track of. i knew that going into it, but i don't edit at all. my philosophy is to just write sexy stuff because that's what we're all here for and if i stressed out about the writing quality too much i would just never publish anything or it would become un-fun.
3/30/21, 11:05 AM
This was great! I often though about some mangas like King's game or Death's choice, with the people turning against each other and looking for themselves rather than focusing on everyone's survival. It's probably because I'm thinking of horror mangas that I am worried for the fate of those jocks... Definitively interested in how the alpha card would play (but how would this card receives unanimity before they all turned gay or something?)... Not much into humiliation, so I can't give ideas.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:51 PM
@BobbyBlobfish the cards are there to add discord so that you keep getting reminded how the boys are fighting against doing gay shit and what their priorities are for avoiding it, so yeah that's a very humiliation aspect of it. the only reason they'd pick one card is to avoid the others
3/30/21, 3:08 PM
Thank you. Getting chapter 4 set up đŸ˜„
3/30/21, 2:57 PM
that was a nice series, thank you
3/1/21, 7:43 AM
Very creative storytelling style! I also liked the ending, even if it didn't quite make sense to me how his friends would all succumb so quickly when it took him nearly two weeks to get to that point.

3/30/21, 2:14 PM
Something’s not right with the AI. Notice the glitch on Day 5 (also when the flashing started). My thoughts are Harry was eazed into it, but the video they watched was a stronger, more advanced video, so the friends are affected differently. Maybe something another author can address if they want to add a chapter. Maybe Ron and Jeff had already been part of the Beta, but never mentioned it to Harry, and that’s why it worked quicker than it did with Justin? (reposted the reply now that we can reply directly, in case you didn't see the original) @Hypnothrill
Zathras
3/23/21, 2:08 AM
Awesome chapter, I loved watching Preppy fight even though he was destined to surrender together with the Bobby cameo

3/30/21, 1:24 PM
@Zathras Thanks
Rx9dr
3/21/21, 11:27 PM
That was definitely worth the wait. That was perfect chapter to watch Preppy's surrender.

3/30/21, 1:22 PM
@Rx9dr Thanks!
Assman_69
3/21/21, 10:34 AM
Wow, an incredible chapter. I loved how Preppy's lifetime of conditioning as a Prescott fought Dave's new control but he had to submit. I love how Dave controls his Kappa boys!

3/30/21, 1:22 PM
@Assman_69 It was fun to write too. Thanks