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3/30/21, 11:05 AM
This was great! I often though about some mangas like King's game or Death's choice, with the people turning against each other and looking for themselves rather than focusing on everyone's survival. It's probably because I'm thinking of horror mangas that I am worried for the fate of those jocks... Definitively interested in how the alpha card would play (but how would this card receives unanimity before they all turned gay or something?)... Not much into humiliation, so I can't give ideas.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:51 PM
@BobbyBlobfish the cards are there to add discord so that you keep getting reminded how the boys are fighting against doing gay shit and what their priorities are for avoiding it, so yeah that's a very humiliation aspect of it. the only reason they'd pick one card is to avoid the others
3/30/21, 3:08 PM
Thank you. Getting chapter 4 set up 😄
3/30/21, 2:57 PM
that was a nice series, thank you
3/1/21, 7:43 AM
Very creative storytelling style! I also liked the ending, even if it didn't quite make sense to me how his friends would all succumb so quickly when it took him nearly two weeks to get to that point.

3/30/21, 2:14 PM
Something’s not right with the AI. Notice the glitch on Day 5 (also when the flashing started). My thoughts are Harry was eazed into it, but the video they watched was a stronger, more advanced video, so the friends are affected differently. Maybe something another author can address if they want to add a chapter. Maybe Ron and Jeff had already been part of the Beta, but never mentioned it to Harry, and that’s why it worked quicker than it did with Justin? (reposted the reply now that we can reply directly, in case you didn't see the original) @Hypnothrill
Zathras
3/23/21, 2:08 AM
Awesome chapter, I loved watching Preppy fight even though he was destined to surrender together with the Bobby cameo

3/30/21, 1:24 PM
@Zathras Thanks
Rx9dr
3/21/21, 11:27 PM
That was definitely worth the wait. That was perfect chapter to watch Preppy's surrender.

3/30/21, 1:22 PM
@Rx9dr Thanks!
Assman_69
3/21/21, 10:34 AM
Wow, an incredible chapter. I loved how Preppy's lifetime of conditioning as a Prescott fought Dave's new control but he had to submit. I love how Dave controls his Kappa boys!

3/30/21, 1:22 PM
@Assman_69 It was fun to write too. Thanks
Anonymous
3/21/21, 1:37 PM
Oh loved this chapter so much... the waiting was worth it! I liked the small fight of Preppy but as expected he ended up a slave... and even better a servant like the ones his grandparent had. I'd like to see more this dynamic at the Den and maybe see more of findom that Dave gets use of his new money that comes from his new slave

3/30/21, 1:21 PM
@MxHyp It's great to hear that people like what you've written and get feedback. Thanks
3/22/21, 9:35 AM
perfect inclusion making the rich boy the Butler. I love that you find a different role for everyone in a creative way

3/30/21, 1:19 PM
@ForgottenCradle Thanks!
Leo
3/27/21, 4:21 AM
I said it before and I’ll say it again, I love, love, love this series!! Thank you for taking your readers’ ideas into consideration. I really appreciate it <3 Seeing Preppy go from a snobby rich dude to a mindless, obedient, butler was so hot! I enjoyed everything Dave made him do!! Such a sexy chapter. I cummed so much lol. I am excited for Preppy to go further into enslavement and accept his new position in life, serving his new master hand and foot. I also think Preppy should begin handing over all of his personal belongings to Dave, money, cars, home, etc. Btw I love his new uniform: completely nude, with a tie and cuffs. Very erotic! However, I also think Dave’s slaves would look great while wearing a pair of flip flops. Lastly, I think it would be so hot if the slaves had a daily ritual where they all bowed and worshipped their master. Cisco sucking his toes, Bobby kissing him, Preppy sucking his dick, etc. Thanking Dave for changing their lives for the better. It’s so nice seeing the young dude have complete control over all these straight, masculine, older men. This series is by far the best on this site, this was such a good chapter! Your writing and creativity is out of this world!! Keep up the amazing work! I can’t wait for the following chapters :)

3/30/21, 1:19 PM
@Leo Thanks, it's always great to get feedback on the story. Thanks for your great feedback, it really keeps me motivated.