Recent Comments

Underwearguy72
3/29/21, 12:39 PM
Great story so far. You are an excellent writer and this is a very interesting and compellling story. I can't wait to see what you have instore for them coming up. I do have one question, will any underwear or mention of underwear that these various frat boys are wearing come into play in the story? Just curious. I eagerly await the next chapter. Excellent job and writing.
3/29/21, 12:08 PM
Trevor was referred to as Travis a lot in this chapter, I guess that was unintended?
davesub
3/29/21, 11:31 AM
this gets better and better. and i can't stop going to the link.
Evan
3/29/21, 10:52 AM
Wow. Great premise. VERY excited to see it in action. Looking forward to coming chapters!
3/29/21, 9:43 AM
HOTTTT would love more stories with this genie
3/29/21, 8:59 AM
so hot! can't wait to see more magical items!
3/29/21, 8:48 AM
super hot! especially in the second half, but i was super confused with the perspective jump at first
3/29/21, 4:35 AM
Continue please!
3/29/21, 4:24 AM
Glad you liked it! unfortunately it stops there, but if you want to write with me, message me!
3/29/21, 1:11 AM
So, apparently, I need to stay out of my comments more often. It's great to see you guys chatting about the character motivations and stuff. Don't let me stop you! ;) I will respond to Art's comment, though: while Vicente will no doubt hypnotize some of the skater boys in the future (and has in the past), that's outside the scope of this story. The story's going to focus entirely on the family, nobody else.