Recent Comments

3/29/21, 10:27 PM
Its well written and all, but if I must be honest, I'm here for the dad, if Vincent doesn't want him, Can I keep him? <3
3/29/21, 9:44 PM
I like this a lot! It has some of the same overtones as @rubbrsome 's BRAIN DRAIN -- and it's hitting a lot of my buttons. Excited to see this continue!
3/29/21, 9:37 PM
So far so good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Jan 20, 2007
3/29/21, 9:15 PM
One of my favorite stories to read over and over again. Thank you for the wonderful writing and discription of the changes. I love how you incorporated the idea of runes.
3/29/21, 8:51 PM
this humiliation is really turning me on
3/29/21, 8:03 PM
Ethan gives you the creeps or Vicente? Vicente's *supposed* to give you the creeps. If you meant Ethan, how so?
3/29/21, 7:16 PM
can't wait for more.
Tyrol
3/29/21, 6:22 PM
Thanks guys for letting me know about the Trevor/Travis issue. Yes it should all be Trevor. I have an edit queued. Thanks for all your feedback as well!
fishboy
3/29/21, 6:06 PM
Really enjoyed this and would love to read a sequel! Curious to see more about Finding and how the drug to take away auras works. If an aura can be removed, can a one be artificially imposed and what would that do to a person? Can it be regained after it's lost and how? I found the concept really interesting and fun. Also thought the descriptions of each aura were really cool. The unresolved stuff with Louis and Danny has lots of potential and I'd be excited to find out how that turns out. Lots of interesting directions it could go!
Ravenclaw
3/29/21, 5:30 PM
I would love it if Ethan turned the tables on Vicente and got him, his dad and brother for himself. Would be a good way to finish. He just gives me the creeps.