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3/30/21, 7:04 AM
The rules are a bit hard to keep track off if I'm going to be honest, however this was one fucking hot chapter! I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeves :) wouldn't have minded them chosing the Alpha option...

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:54 PM
@Transformheaven thanks for the feedback! yeah i know it's hard to keep track of. i knew that going into it, but i don't edit at all. my philosophy is to just write sexy stuff because that's what we're all here for and if i stressed out about the writing quality too much i would just never publish anything or it would become un-fun.
3/30/21, 11:05 AM
This was great! I often though about some mangas like King's game or Death's choice, with the people turning against each other and looking for themselves rather than focusing on everyone's survival. It's probably because I'm thinking of horror mangas that I am worried for the fate of those jocks... Definitively interested in how the alpha card would play (but how would this card receives unanimity before they all turned gay or something?)... Not much into humiliation, so I can't give ideas.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:51 PM
@BobbyBlobfish the cards are there to add discord so that you keep getting reminded how the boys are fighting against doing gay shit and what their priorities are for avoiding it, so yeah that's a very humiliation aspect of it. the only reason they'd pick one card is to avoid the others
3/30/21, 3:08 PM
Thank you. Getting chapter 4 set up đŸ˜„
3/30/21, 2:57 PM
that was a nice series, thank you
3/1/21, 7:43 AM
Very creative storytelling style! I also liked the ending, even if it didn't quite make sense to me how his friends would all succumb so quickly when it took him nearly two weeks to get to that point.

3/30/21, 2:14 PM
Something’s not right with the AI. Notice the glitch on Day 5 (also when the flashing started). My thoughts are Harry was eazed into it, but the video they watched was a stronger, more advanced video, so the friends are affected differently. Maybe something another author can address if they want to add a chapter. Maybe Ron and Jeff had already been part of the Beta, but never mentioned it to Harry, and that’s why it worked quicker than it did with Justin? (reposted the reply now that we can reply directly, in case you didn't see the original) @Hypnothrill
Zathras
3/23/21, 2:08 AM
Awesome chapter, I loved watching Preppy fight even though he was destined to surrender together with the Bobby cameo

3/30/21, 1:24 PM
@Zathras Thanks
Rx9dr
3/21/21, 11:27 PM
That was definitely worth the wait. That was perfect chapter to watch Preppy's surrender.

3/30/21, 1:22 PM
@Rx9dr Thanks!
Assman_69
3/21/21, 10:34 AM
Wow, an incredible chapter. I loved how Preppy's lifetime of conditioning as a Prescott fought Dave's new control but he had to submit. I love how Dave controls his Kappa boys!

3/30/21, 1:22 PM
@Assman_69 It was fun to write too. Thanks
Anonymous
3/21/21, 1:37 PM
Oh loved this chapter so much... the waiting was worth it! I liked the small fight of Preppy but as expected he ended up a slave... and even better a servant like the ones his grandparent had. I'd like to see more this dynamic at the Den and maybe see more of findom that Dave gets use of his new money that comes from his new slave

3/30/21, 1:21 PM
@MxHyp It's great to hear that people like what you've written and get feedback. Thanks
3/22/21, 9:35 AM
perfect inclusion making the rich boy the Butler. I love that you find a different role for everyone in a creative way

3/30/21, 1:19 PM
@ForgottenCradle Thanks!