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3/29/21, 7:16 PM
can't wait for more.
Tyrol
3/29/21, 6:22 PM
Thanks guys for letting me know about the Trevor/Travis issue. Yes it should all be Trevor. I have an edit queued. Thanks for all your feedback as well!
fishboy
3/29/21, 6:06 PM
Really enjoyed this and would love to read a sequel! Curious to see more about Finding and how the drug to take away auras works. If an aura can be removed, can a one be artificially imposed and what would that do to a person? Can it be regained after it's lost and how? I found the concept really interesting and fun. Also thought the descriptions of each aura were really cool. The unresolved stuff with Louis and Danny has lots of potential and I'd be excited to find out how that turns out. Lots of interesting directions it could go!
Ravenclaw
3/29/21, 5:30 PM
I would love it if Ethan turned the tables on Vicente and got him, his dad and brother for himself. Would be a good way to finish. He just gives me the creeps.
3/29/21, 1:18 PM
oooh so very good.....want to know what happens next.....cant wait
Underwearguy72
3/29/21, 12:39 PM
Great story so far. You are an excellent writer and this is a very interesting and compellling story. I can't wait to see what you have instore for them coming up. I do have one question, will any underwear or mention of underwear that these various frat boys are wearing come into play in the story? Just curious. I eagerly await the next chapter. Excellent job and writing.
3/29/21, 12:08 PM
Trevor was referred to as Travis a lot in this chapter, I guess that was unintended?
davesub
3/29/21, 11:31 AM
this gets better and better. and i can't stop going to the link.
Evan
3/29/21, 10:52 AM
Wow. Great premise. VERY excited to see it in action. Looking forward to coming chapters!
3/29/21, 9:43 AM
HOTTTT would love more stories with this genie