What an evocative story! The woods, the late autumn chill in the New England air, the Reverend out on a search... for *something*. The witch's enthrallment of the Reverend proceeds with perfect pacing, too.

Awesome!

HOT!

I found the conversion method at the end to be a lot hotter than I anticipated. And in a way it made sense that when they discovered that not only was Ben lying about drinking the water but smashed the pump. So in a "punishment" kind of way it works. I would like to know more. Does the pump get fixed? Do they find another way to access the special well water? Does it evolve to being transmittable through semen and or saliva? I say if you feel it, go for it. I came read good with this one and I will say the pictures really helped visualize the story.

Hey guys - sorry it's taken me so long to write back to all your incredible comments! Y'all made writing this a ton of fun, and I hope you'll all continue to comment on other stories in the future – both mine and other authors! I love you all, thank you for reading! ♥️ [@EchoBravo](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/19083) - Thanks man! I didn't expect everyone to catch on to Sam so fast, I had to do some fancy footwork to bring everything together. Glad it worked :) **@anon** - Thank you! I'm so thrilled that you read all the way through. [@hivemindlover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1644947) - Thanks man! Glad you were here for the ride :) [@FeedYourHead](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1170832) - Phew, I'm glad you saw Sam as a twist, I was pretty sure y'all had figured it out before I even wrote it! I'm a sucker for a good friendship saving the day, and when it's a story about touch... well, Sam's fate wrote itself. [@Sakfal](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/943866) - I hear you, but I write what's hot to me. Besides, I needed Marc to have some karmic consequences, and this is the one that turns me on. Thanks for reading! [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Oh man, I seriously considered the idea that every so often, when the moon was full and the stars were clear, Sam might be able to grab ahold of someone and rejoin our world for a few hours, leaving behind a horny hottie when he left. But what's the point of trapping him if he gets vacations? [@jitter](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/974260) - Thanks man! Imagine, I almost ended it after chapter one. [@Buffy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/13727) - Nine days bro, it only took nine days to write and post all of it! Feels longer, huh? I doubt I'll revisit this universe, after all, we already know nothing else unusual happened to Marc. Now, Dale on the other hand... [@Catalust](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/920370) - I'm a sap, what can I say? [@Horn](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1014477) - Thanks dude! Thanks for reading! [@mrb971](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/46949) - Let's not go that far, I'm always trying to top myself ;) [@PTutius27](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/979133) - Aw, thank you sir! I'm glad it worked! [@HunkLover](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/914611) - Someday I'm gonna do a twist where there's no twist. Everyone is gonna be so confused. [@absman420](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/162063) - In my original notes, Sam and Marc made the decision to touch, to hell with the consequences of Marc's ring. Sam gets horny, but Marc feels his body twisting and convulsing. His finger gets long and skinny, making the ring fall off. Sam snatches it up and proceeds with his evil speech, changing Marc into just another meathead jock. [@Proteus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/961566) - Sometimes too good to be true is... well, too good to be true. One of my favourite things to do when writing is to make a character easy to fall for, just so I can stab you with him later. If it helps, Sam's not technically dead. According to my notes, he's trapped in 'the ghost realm', a parallel reality to ours with all the same stuff but none of the people. Sometimes when the walls between reality gets thin, he sees ghostly people walking around, but he can't touch them. That's when people on campus can see his ghostly figure too. Not that I thought about it for way too long... **@anon2** - Thanks for reading all the way through! [@BlindSeer0](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/381024) - Okay, I'm really glad someone liked the instructions. I felt like I was using a deus ex sarcina, but I guess it worked out! I'm also a sucker for that nonsense, and I didn't really think Marc could redeem himself. Riley seemed like the only available character who could really take on the job. Plus, as soon as I pictured him busting through the door with the fire axe, it had to happen. Glad I left you with a lot to think about around Marc ;) [@MonsterMash62](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/3332) - Thanks man! If you're happy with it, I'm definitely happy with it :) [@Hypnoguy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/908028) - I felt kinda bad that I didn't bring the professor or Dale into the last chapter. I suppose them being all mentor-y in the penultimate chapter will have to do! [@Daddywanted](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/2417606) - Hehe, awesome. Thanks man! What'd you think of Professor Wilson's change into more of a Daddy figure? [@Tattcub](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/21054) - That sounds like way too much more bro. Just pump your muscles, pump your cock, pump out more porn. Now repeat after me... pump your muscles... **@anon3** - I considered a few different endings. In 'the bad one', Riley is too late to save Marc, leaving Marc nothing but a slobbering hunk of manmeat who sucks any dick that gets put in front of him. Riley is transformed into a super pumped bodybuilder who hates Sam, but he'll do anything for that cock so he plays the devoted servant. Sam isn't interested in a boyfriend, he just wants men to serve him. By the end of the night, he's finished converting the dorm into a harem of muscle slaves, and we imply that it's only a matter of days until he finishes the campus. The story ends on a tropical island where Sam lives a life of luxury, every need attended to. We see some of Marc's transformees like Caleb or Professor Wilson make appearances as slaves that are addicted to Sam's cum. It doesn't seem like Marc makes the cut. The US Army raids the island in an attempt to capture Sam, with many of his slaves being killed in the process. We see Riley take a bullet to the head, desperate to protect the man he hates. Sam flees to a hiding spot, completely uncaring for the lives being lost. After all... he can always rebuild. The story ends with Sam reaching out to touch a marine, beginning the entire chain of events over again. There's a reason I decided to go another direction. **@anon4** - Thanks! I love this comment, I'm a sucker for a happy ending too. As I said to @anon3 above, there was a downer ending I could have gone towards, but where's the fun in that? Besides, I fell in love with Riley a bit as I was writing this, and I couldn't bear to see anything happen to him. BTW, I loved your comment so much I read the first sentence to my husband. He corrected my pronunciation of yugioh. [@Varlance](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/794107) - Glad you enjoyed it! I considered a variation on the ending where the guy Marc sent to the gym would show up a few minutes after Sam. Marc would try to turn him away, but he'd see Sam in the room and say 'That's him. That's the guy.' It would lead to a bit more of a struggle, but it didn't set up the fire axe bit as well, and I wanted that bit.

Nice groundwork, I guess next chapter will be longer to explore a period of three month. Take your time so that it flows well. The writing is good, but sometime I had a bit of an hard time reading the last part. Sometimes we had Judge's opinions, sometimes it felt more like an exterior narrator. But maybe it's just me who's tired.

I'm not into water sports either. I was expecting a water well repairman to come out that looked like he stepped off a BB competition stage with a donkey dick. Maybe it was his cum that tainted the well in the beginning. I wouldn't mind if his pre were to start changes in Ben and maybe fucking Tom and Parker would seal their fate. Seemed rush. Looking forward to new chapters. Reminds me a little bit of Bill Drake's "Cornell, TX" series with the water making changes to the men in later chapters.

Holy Shit, this is incredibly hot! Wish we could pipe that muzak into all our department stores! Want to know if the effect s permanent?

I love these stories. Was talking to DerekWilliams about Nanites and I remembered these series. I'll have to read them again. Thanks J Alexander. Hope you are well and still writing. We aren't going to cum by ourselves... We will but it can be more fun with stories like these.

Jon deserves to be punished for this transgression. Maybe be Theo's servant for a week and call him sir when they are alone in the room.