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3/26/21, 5:38 PM
Jon deserves to be punished for this transgression. Maybe be Theo's servant for a week and call him sir when they are alone in the room.
3/26/21, 4:35 PM
Really loving this series!
3/26/21, 4:07 PM
I started this story intending to write a *very* brief Tumblr post to go with a picture (the one I link to at the end). Even though I fleshed it out a bit, my main goal was to provide a backstory to the guy in the image and why he's wearing that blank grin and pair of Nike Pro shorts (and holding that ball and those pads). Of course, the words should still stand on their own, too. @Lohengrin To me, transformation and mind control are very erotic on their own. If the opportunity arose to include a sex scene I would have, but neither Sato nor Coach Johnson seemed to be suitable partners for the age-regressed narrator. Maybe I wasn't feeling in a transgressive-enough mood yesterday. This story got hit with the safe mode restriction anyways. @Hypnothrill I thought I could get away with the weird impossible narration like some existing works do, but I guess you're right. When I was almost finished I felt it wasn't gay enough so I threw that twist at the end. I'm comfortable writing TFs in 3rd and even 2nd person and maybe it could have worked changing the perspective. I just might edit this story using your suggestion, though. Sato *could* gloat about dominating Coach Johnson and then command the narrator forget, wielding his tech one more time. EDIT: OK, I actually just submitted an edit, adding a bit here and there, but especially at the end, inspired by what Hypnothrill commented.
3/26/21, 2:49 PM
I would love to see a continuation Maybe they go after the rest of the jocks from the gym
3/26/21, 2:24 PM
I'd love to hear a bit of revenge by the brother, sneaking into Jensens room and shoving two pills into his cock, making him an insatiable top for his insatiable bottom brother
3/26/21, 2:11 PM
I am absolutely in love with this series! This story and entire series turned out to be one of my personal favorites on the site. The whole cast and plot you've created is just so good. Also kudos for actually creating an entire arc for the characters here. Can't wait for the final part!
3/26/21, 11:24 AM
Ah, so *he* was the villain after all. Nicely done and great resolution for Marc (and thematically) as well. In retrospect, I notice Marc didn't hear back from the guy he was planning to use as a trap to find the second ring holder. That could have made for a hot scene with a chance to hint further at who the villain was. :) Thanks for the wild ride!
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3/26/21, 11:24 AM
this is an amazing story... such a great build up to chapter 3... and then that is such a hot installment... i hope there is more to come!!!
3/26/21, 11:13 AM
i really enjoy it would love a sequel to see what he does to them
3/26/21, 11:07 AM
I suspect Marc will be redeemed at the end of this tale. :) Now, who could the holder of the other ring be? My money's on Max. He saw the effect of the ring on Riley and Marc in an earlier chapter, maybe he decided to buy a ring of his own...